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#176 Before February 2015

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Re: c

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Master1 is late again, what we do now?

We wait.

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#177 Before February 2015

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Re: c

anch159 wrote:
Creature wrote:

Master1 is late again, what we do now?

We wait.

That's obvious. Creature, you are dead you can't rest in peace without knowing who kills you?


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#178 Before February 2015

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Re: c

Darn it now I can't coin DClevels

edit: hey, I bet the murderer is Master1

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#179 Before February 2015

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Re: c

The Doctor wrote:
anch159 wrote:
Creature wrote:

Master1 is late again, what we do now?

We wait.

That's obvious. Creature, you are dead you can't rest in peace without knowing who kills you?

Nah, our souls are trapped until story ends.


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#180 Before February 2015

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Oh then i see the inconvenient.
I'm shure that Master1 can't be the murder is only an objective narrator.
Plz hurry up I don't have any other sleep story.


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#181 Before February 2015

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Re: c

Yeah so, I'm late for two reasons.
1. Internet decided to be stupid and committed suicide last night when I was about to start writing. It's fixed now though //forums.everybodyedits.com/img/smilies/tongue

2. I need Koto to help make sure I don't forget to include anything that he wanted me to include.

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Don't worry too much about it being late. This is why I gave myself a day in between each chapter. I failed to do it saturday, so today is a free day that I can use to get it done. The story will still be finished by Friday.


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#182 Before February 2015

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Re: c

Don't forget The Note.


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#183 Before February 2015

Koto
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Bahh, you changed how he died back to the original name.   Although, I do like it happening here better, I wonder if we should have let the others know about the passages or not.
7 is released, btw

EDIT: Why are my two chapters the most impossible to read colors on this god forsaken forum? lol

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#184 Before February 2015

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Yeah 7 is annoying to read. Nice story btw, I like how it's starting to progress more now.


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#185 Before February 2015

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So, is everyone just going to ignore the fact that I slept with Honey and Boh?

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#186 Before February 2015

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I know what Master1 do, he kill who make biggest appearence, since Benje00 is having biggest appearence, he would die at next chapter, also, Honeybucckles come later with who most make appearence, Boh and Gkabyssflorida have bigger chance to be murderers. Deaths:
Chapter 8: Benje00
Chapter 9: Honeybuckles44
Chapter 10: Boh(I guess Boh have most chance to get killed than Gka)
Also, the murderer will be Gka if MrShoe keeps missing.


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#187 Before February 2015

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Re: c

Benje00 wrote:

So, is everyone just going to ignore the fact that I slept with Honey and Boh?

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Almost slept with honey and boh.


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#188 Before February 2015

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Im guessing its one of the gals. or maybe both of em' But what do i know.


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#189 Before February 2015

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I think it's someone else who they don't know about, who was in the house before them. I can't imagine any of the characters we known about being able to set up a tripwire arrow trap while they were at the house because I don't think anyone really had any arrows or wire or anything needed to set it up. Though, MrShoe could have done it because he was the one who organised the trip so he could have set it up beforehand. But my bet is that someone new we don't know about is the one murdering everyone.

Also, assuming gka is the one sleeping in that cave, I think he probably ran away because he couldn't trust anyone. That's what I would do; I couldn't live in a house with a murderer.


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#190 Before February 2015

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Wait so if all 3 of them unlocked there doors and came out, it couldn't have been any of them...
But...

Master1 wrote:

He had just reached the top of the stairs, when a mysterious figure shut the lights off in the upstairs hallway... One by one, their heads poked out of the hallway, and Boh, who was at the far end of the hallway

Master1 probably wouldn't have said "Boh, who was at the far end of the hallway" if he might have been the murderer. Boh could have shut off the light and be a mysterious figure because he was at the end of the hallway, which was hard to see.
But it also couldn't have been Boh, because Boh (in chapter 4) was talking when the smell started, so she couldn't have went to the kitchen, and came back.
Now back to Chapter 7, there was a mysterious figure who has shot Theditor from the top of the staircase right? If Boh, Honey, and Benje saw that there was a gun on his chest, and there was a note, who could have put it? Could Theditor have faked his death? Could the myserious figure be gkabyss (who is innocent)? Maybe Theditor is still alive. It never said the mysterious figure shot him. And it just said it went Bang as he stumbled down the staircase. But how could the bullet go through Theditor and he could have faked his death? Theditor probably isn't the murderer.
Now... Honey... When she said "so who's next?" she was talking to Boh and. If Boh and Honey did plan this together, it would make sense that they would let failgirl go down by herself without protecting her much. When Honey said "so who's next" and she claimed that she meant who the next murderer might be, it wouldn't make sense to say "so who's next?". Maybe it's Honey and Boh.
Now Master1 draws too much suspicion on Gka and MrShoe being the murderer, so I think Benje is the potential killer, because he seems like the most innocent guy.
Wait actually this doesn't make sense because at the end of Chapter 7, it says there was someone already sleeping there. So Theditor (maybe who fakes his death) Gka, or MrShoe is the murderer. Benje was walking with them so how could he be snoring in the cave?...

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#191 Before February 2015

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Oh man, I feel like I am back to square 1. At this point I feel like I had a better idea who was the murderer back when stagecrew died.
So I am left to think there are multiple murderers, or there have been a lot of accidental deaths and accidental murders such as with DC, or someone pretended to die but are actually alive.


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#192 Before February 2015

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So Benje is a player and me and Boh are conspiring together? Maybe it was me.. I locked Benje out of the room for no reason.. to be alone when I was the most scared.. //forums.everybodyedits.com/img/smilies/wink hmm. Damn I'm evil.

#193 Before February 2015

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Re: c

Yay m1 is late again woo!! much fun, very wow. Adjusting schedule so I don't kill myself:
Chapter 8 (Monday or Tuesday)
Chapter 9 (Wednesday or Thursday)
Chapter 10 (Friday or Saturday)
Saturday is the latest I can go, since I am leaving to go on vacation around 11pm.
I procrastinated my procrastination today by procrastinating. I will get chapter 8 done tomorrow or rape.
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New schedule gives me more room to work with also, I hate writing this btw.


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#194 Before February 2015

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That's why you should listen to me more.


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#195 Before February 2015

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WAIT! I know! They all committed suicide! //forums.everybodyedits.com/img/smilies/tongue

#196 Before February 2015

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Re: c

Master1 wrote:

Chapter 8 (Monday or Tuesday)

Today is Tuesday, last day to you post Chapter 8.


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#197 Before February 2015

Koto
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To you better post!


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#198 Before February 2015

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Creature wrote:
Master1 wrote:

Chapter 8 (Monday or Tuesday)

Today is Tuesday, last day to you post Chapter 8.

ty for pointing out the obvious


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#199 Before February 2015

Anch
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Re: c

Master1 can edit the schedule if he wants. Don't pressure him.

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#200 Before February 2015

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Re: c

anch159 wrote:

Master1 can edit the schedule if he wants. Don't pressure him.

Soon, master1's schedule:
Chapter 8: Tricember 32nd, 6190
Chapter 9: Tricember 48th, 7889
Chapter 10: Tricember 96th, 56823


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