Official Everybody Edits Forums

RavaTroll

Member

From: France

Joined: 2015-02-16

Posts: 820

RavaTroll's Secret HQ

Hey.

I just, for now, need feedbacks on the art in my new 400x200 level.
Here's a part of the minimap :

The tree-trunks, the sand, the dirt, some of the mountains, the cloud and the water are obviously not finish'd.

The jungle, almost finished.

The submarine base.

Level links ( Only visiting - no minis )
http://beta.everybodyedits.com/games/PWas0QFAVma0I
http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWas0QFAVma0I

Last edited by RavaTroll (Jan 28 2011 7:59:16 am)

---

Trolls be in da place, mon !

Bossking

Guest

Re: RavaTroll's Secret HQ

Cool but i dont understand what are thos darker mountains

RavaTroll

Member

From: France

Joined: 2015-02-16

Posts: 820

Re: RavaTroll's Secret HQ

Well, i need "empty blocks" for the minis, so I had to do some shading on the mountains. ( All the mountains will look like the "color'd one" )
I don't really know what to think of this, so here I am, asking for feedbacks

---

Trolls be in da place, mon !

EDJ

Member

Joined: 2015-08-20

Posts: 2,157

Re: RavaTroll's Secret HQ

So far so good, but the darker mountain is not really realistic with the colors

Bossking

Guest

Re: RavaTroll's Secret HQ

Well, i need "empty blocks" for the minis, so I had to do some shading on the mountains. ( All the mountains will look like the "color'd one" )
I don't really know what to think of this, so here I am, asking for feedbacks

Oh its really nice btw tell us when its ready

Kaosslasher

Guest

Re: RavaTroll's Secret HQ

I love those kind of trees

c- can i be your student lol

BEE

Member

Joined: 2015-03-14

Posts: 1,679

Re: RavaTroll's Secret HQ

Love it, only criticism I have is that the angle for the light on the mountains and the trees is slightly at different angles. Unless the mountain's left shading is more from the rock on the mountain itself, its a little hard to tell intentional details with EE art sadly.

Cant wait to see how you do the sand btw.

---

Custom Tab: Forum Post|Trello

Thanks Xen for my Avatar and Smitty for the smiley

Fir3Fli3

Guest

Re: RavaTroll's Secret HQ

the forest looks really cool :3

RavaTroll

Member

From: France

Joined: 2015-02-16

Posts: 820

Re: RavaTroll's Secret HQ

Last version.

Last edited by RavaTroll (Jan 26 2011 12:17:21 pm)

---

Trolls be in da place, mon !

BEE

Member

Joined: 2015-03-14

Posts: 1,679

Re: RavaTroll's Secret HQ

is that helicopter crashing? :c

---

Custom Tab: Forum Post|Trello

Thanks Xen for my Avatar and Smitty for the smiley

RavaTroll

Member

From: France

Joined: 2015-02-16

Posts: 820

Re: RavaTroll's Secret HQ

Don't know yet.
Since this is the start, it could be the explanation of why it drops you in the sea.

---

Trolls be in da place, mon !

tokebot

Guest

Re: RavaTroll's Secret HQ

i like the style and meticulous shading very much.

Do you plan to have the players go over the trees or do you work your way from the bottom of the see through the big onecolored brown area?

RavaTroll

Member

From: France

Joined: 2015-02-16

Posts: 820

Re: RavaTroll's Secret HQ

Bottom only.
Too much keys over the trees.

---

Trolls be in da place, mon !

tokebot

Guest

Re: RavaTroll's Secret HQ

keys over the trees. that rhymes...

one thing that i would have to add is that the mid-distant hill with the two trees has the same colors and shading patten as the 4 treetops in the foreground. it looks as if a fifth tree in the background is wearing a little tree hat. maybe the grass should be a tone darker.

RavaTroll

Member

From: France

Joined: 2015-02-16

Posts: 820

Re: RavaTroll's Secret HQ

Yes, I tried different colors but this was the only green that "matches" the color palette of the level. I may have to change this green to a lighter or darker one. I tried to had details like distant flowers, but it wasn't very convincing.

The Submarine base. What do you guys think ?

Also, first post updated.

Last edited by RavaTroll (Jan 27 2011 12:59:51 pm)

---

Trolls be in da place, mon !

tokebot

Guest

Re: RavaTroll's Secret HQ

the submarine looks a bit whale-ish, but the factory style background is awesome

RavaTroll

Member

From: France

Joined: 2015-02-16

Posts: 820

Re: RavaTroll's Secret HQ

Yeah, I had to make a "pocket submarine"

Level links ( Only visiting - no minis )
http://beta.everybodyedits.com/games/PWas0QFAVma0I
http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWas0QFAVma0I

( First post updated. )

---

Trolls be in da place, mon !

Fendox

Guest

Re: RavaTroll's Secret HQ

I'm in it right now. :3

(You are there. )

I'm stuck...
Btw. EDJ was there.

Last edited by Fendox (Jan 28 2011 9:15:11 am)

RavaTroll

Member

From: France

Joined: 2015-02-16

Posts: 820

Re: RavaTroll's Secret HQ

Yeah, I saw you

I'm still thinking the guest part for now.
I think I'll have Bee and Starblinky as first guests. ( To design minis / art inside their quarters, if they want to )

---

Trolls be in da place, mon !

JadElClemens

Member

From: Colorado, USA

Joined: 2015-02-15

Posts: 4,559

Re: RavaTroll's Secret HQ

Looks great, man. I know that's exactly the same thing as I said on your tutorial post, but I'm too tired to think...

---

I hate tall signatures.