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Need a tester and an editor

Hello im making a new level
It is 200x200.
The start is:

The link is: http://everybodyedits.com/games/PW5JUexapia0I

Please come

Arianna

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Re: Need a tester and an editor

Sure I'll test it, I need something to do.
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Different55

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Joined: 2015-02-07

Posts: 16,575

Re: Need a tester and an editor

I might test.

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Calicara

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Re: Need a tester and an editor

It's okay. The level itself is allright, but it could be better. First off the challenges were pretty easy, I think I could handle something a littlle more difficult. If the minis are to easy people might get frustrated and leave. Second, I feel like you just draw a bunch of random things and didn't really have something you were aiming for. Usually people base their levels off a theme, like caves, cities, or forests and such. I feel like you had no idea where it was going and just drew random stuff. Third the things you did draw were very disorganized and out of sorts. It feels like once you made the challenges that was it. And you didn't go back to improve or edit them. Overall I give it a 5/10. 3 for the effort, and 2 for the minis. My opinion? Keep the level you have now, but go back and edit it. Add details, make the challenges harder. Try to keep the essence of the original level, but while still adding more creativeness. I think you might be on to something, you just have to organize your ideas and put them together into something great

Last edited by Calicara (Feb 7 2011 4:55:05 pm)