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fuzzy

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Feedback wanted

hey

im making a level in my great saved world and i would like some feedback on:

how it looks
how it can be improved
what i could add to it
and anything else that you think would help me

please note that there are no minigames yet i will add them later

http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWAHRo7aaRa0I
enjoy

To Do:
shade mountains/hills
add rooots
fix the sun

Last edited by fuzzy (Apr 28 2011 3:43:39 am)

Thunder

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Re: Feedback wanted

I'm not really sure, but I think you might, just might have looked at a guide for making a world... I'm not 100% sure tough.

Nice tough!

Last edited by Thunder (Apr 27 2011 2:11:10 pm)

treejoe4

Guest

Re: Feedback wanted

Needs
1. mountain shading

fuzzy

Guest

Re: Feedback wanted

kk il get right on with the shading

treejoe4

Guest

Re: Feedback wanted

kk il get right on with the shading

and that rock is the best shading i have ever seen im actually not kidding

Surf

Guest

Re: Feedback wanted

Im pretty sure I told you yesterday that the big tree looked odd without roots and it need more space underground

eg1

Guest

Re: Feedback wanted

Awesome level.

Xpo20

Guest

Re: Feedback wanted

Is it just me or is this Rava's Wizard Tower minus the cliff and tower? Sorry if Im wrong but...

Xero

Guest

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Isn't the tree a bit big?
and the water shouldn't be COMPLETELY flat, but like 1 or 2 block up and downs

Muffin

Guest

Re: Feedback wanted

Water and tree are kinda repetetive and the very top row of the rock looks too bright. The mountains, hills and sun need shading.