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RonaldMcDonald

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Level Criticism? I need some.

Seems like everyone in my level loses interest after 5 minutes.

http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWURIHj5C9a0I

I'm trying to make it like I used to before beta came out, but it's rather... bland. I need some ideas, and some help. I've already made the level less annoying (very few tricky jumps) but it just seems to be boring.

Feel free to completely tear it apart, if you wish to. I can take harsh criticism.

Cyclopsicle

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Re: Level Criticism? I need some.

oK WORLD i GUESS
sorry caps lock to lazy to uncaps

Tako

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From: Memphis, Tennessee, USA

Joined: 2015-08-10

Posts: 6,663

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Re: Level Criticism? I need some.

Too easy.

And lack of direction.

But at least most of the minigames were original.

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Yeah, well, you know that's just like, uh, your opinion, man.

EENinja

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Re: Level Criticism? I need some.

I liked it.

I agree with the lack of direction though.

Although im sure a bunch of people will join in no time... hehehe...

Edit: Holy moly that got a lot of people fast. I counted 36 at one time

Nice work Ronald

Last edited by EENinja (Jun 11 2011 9:39:51 pm)

Wesso

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Re: Level Criticism? I need some.

The minis were generally good, just the normal minis without any gravity changing.

The mini map looked... very messy however. It looks like it got wrecked.

Also the lack of direction was quite huge. I was so confused where to go.

So, you're map was "O.K." according to me

imgood9

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From: 'Murica

Joined: 2015-02-28

Posts: 472

Re: Level Criticism? I need some.

The minis were ok, but the lack of direction got me all confused.

Slovenia

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Re: Level Criticism? I need some.

Nice

RonaldMcDonald

Guest

Re: Level Criticism? I need some.

The lack of direction was a bit intentional -- I like maps where you can explore without being forced to go one way or another. Sort of like the old days when maps were all open.

But since it's confusing, I'll keep that in mind of my next map. It really got out of hand.

Thanks for the help guys!

Wesso

Guest

Re: Level Criticism? I need some.

The lack of direction was a bit intentional -- I like maps where you can explore without being forced to go one way or another. Sort of like the old days when maps were all open.

But since it's confusing, I'll keep that in mind of my next map. It really got out of hand.

Thanks for the help guys!

Unlike you, I like the one path. However... if its like in a big box or something and there's coins scattered throughout, I wouldn't mind the exploring type. But, you made it so that the whole level was exploring which kin d of confused me about where I was going or where I needed to go and if I was missing coins.