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Tako

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From: Memphis, Tennessee, USA

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Fantasy Village

Under construction, but that shouldn't stop you from giving me all your constructive criticism.

So, what's the first issue that you see when you look at that minimap?

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Yeah, well, you know that's just like, uh, your opinion, man.

Tachyonic

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Re: Fantasy Village

The Bridge Rope Thing on the top left of the map needs upgrading. Maybe add red key gates, factory wood and crate blocks and normal brown/light brown bricks to enhance it? Other than that, and the fact it has no houses, people or little areas that you can play in (For instance; an Arena or an Underground Base), it's pretty much perfect.

Last edited by Tachyonic (Jun 15 2011 3:08:29 pm)

Tako

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Re: Fantasy Village

Should the bridge have rails?

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Muffin

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Re: Fantasy Village

It's a village, it needs a few houses and mini smileys.

Tako

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Re: Fantasy Village

Well, it's under construction. Obvious things like houses and people will be made eventually, so it's pointless telling me that

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supadorf24

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Joined: 2015-02-26

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Re: Fantasy Village

First word I think of is cliché. I've seen the classic orange-brick-ground island a million times. Add something to the art to set this apart from the rest.

Tako

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Re: Fantasy Village

Like what, specifically?

The houses and people are definitely different. Expect clouds, and I'm considering erasing the bottom and putting the clouds halfway through so that it looks like they're above the clouds.

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ugotpwned

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Joined: 2015-02-16

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Re: Fantasy Village

imo the water looks weird, ik your not done but i suggest not using blue keys.
nice level so far.

Last edited by UgotPwned (Jun 15 2011 9:42:43 pm)

JadElClemens

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From: Colorado, USA

Joined: 2015-02-15

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Re: Fantasy Village

You definitely need to shade the ground and give the bridge rails-ones that can be passed through by the pipol, if possible.

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Greenzoid2

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Re: Fantasy Village

The water near the ground needs some work, imo.

Helvi

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Joined: 2015-04-06

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Re: Fantasy Village

Reminds me on some SNES game, but cannot remember the name. But is is fine, just imagine a possible background and it would be pretty nice already. Not to mention a following finish;)

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EDJ

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Joined: 2015-08-20

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Re: Fantasy Village

Fantasy Villages shouldn't have the cliche Brown+Green art imo.