Do you think I could just leave this part blank and it'd be okay? We're just going to replace the whole thing with a header image anyway, right?
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I'm pretty **** that you guys keep over-complicating my level.
lol chimi
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I made another one
theme:waterfall
http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWDqeHhguza0I
please give me feedback <3
post #100 <3
Last edited by Surf (Jun 3 2011 2:42:07 pm)
Buzzerbee, the first one is boring as sin, and I'm not going to collect all the coins to get to the other two. Make it possible to go into whichever one I choose.
Buzzerbee, the first one is boring as sin, and I'm not going to collect all the coins to get to the other two. Make it possible to go into whichever one I choose.
well thanks for putting it in kind words -.-
fixed
http://beta.everybodyedits.com/games/PWqP7k0NW3a0I
http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWqP7k0NW3a0I
EDIT: I added a NEW level to the world called "Apple" It's pretty tough, like a 5 or a 6. I don't personally like it for shift, but I DO like it as a minigame. BUT, if you like it, you are free to take it
Last edited by BuzzerBee (Jun 4 2011 12:30:36 am)
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Here is my second attempt as my first one failed
http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWAKw0l3iaa0I
i would give it a 3 or a four
try it and feedback please
Here's the newer version of my map, completely redid the minis. Please consider swapping it. Sorry for all the trouble I'm making you go through...
Beta Link
Normal Link
This is my level.
Difficulty 4-6
Regarding posts without pics are rather ignored, I decided to put some in my post.
The level
Minimap, 100%
Minimap, 200%
This is the third remake on it, I hope this one is better...
Last edited by BorkD (Jun 4 2011 8:46:43 am)
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http://beta.everybodyedits.com/games/PW7sgwpet6a0I
by 2 members of TE Crew, robbert and davidking/iwantgems [me]
Difficulty: 3
Last edited by signinnow (Jun 18 2011 11:15:39 am)
http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWAPnjECG8a0I
Difficulty: 2-4
Theme: The Outdoors
Last edited by imgood9 (Jun 6 2011 3:53:31 pm)
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Hey nou, its Beastmode... here are my four levels and ill put and exit and an entrance so you can play all four
http://beta.everybodyedits.com/games/PW5m_zdKW2a0I
http://everybodyedits.com/games/PW5m_zdKW2a0I
Have fun <3
~ Beastmode
http://everybodyedits.com/games/PW544LWHO0a0I
try it!
SCREENIE:
:D
Last edited by I am the one and only!! (Jun 5 2011 3:36:58 pm)
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added a new level the red key thingy is a difficulty 1.
http://beta.everybodyedits.com/games/PWqP7k0NW3a0I
\EDIT/ I am the one and only... secret blocks = bad idea. plus: IMPOSSIBLE COIN! -.-
Last edited by BuzzerBee (Jun 5 2011 5:15:11 pm)
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Accepted:
Dementia
TakoMan02
Buzzerbee
Thuggishprune
EDJ
Comments:
Deoxys9: No thanks.
Dementia: No to the troll carnage room. Second room is tedious; might be better if it didn't require specific patterns to get the coin. A longshot imo, should probably just dump it and work on something else. Get rid of the red key cluster**** in the third room, and make the paths a little more structured and clear. We accepted one of them, I think the fifth. No to the holdspace.
Herty: Seems like a missed opportunity. The art is great, and the structure of the caverns would be great for a level; instead it has box type minis. Turn the caverns into an actual design and it might be something good.
Shmirt: No thanks, it isn't fun.
Borkd: The other version was better; this one just seems like an assortment of little obstacles. We accepted the other one anyway, so move away from this art.
Mangaonirc: We like the one jump in the bottom middle, the rest eh. Also, you really need to get a better grip on difficulty levels.
Demango: While the individual tricks in the room are pleasant enough, they don't really work together well; seems just like, well, an assortment of tricks. Work on improving the room design to make tricks fit in with each other better and seem like part of a fun overall level.
Buzzerbee: First is no good, as already stated. We don't need another 3 lives room unless it brings something new to the table. The third one is completely trollable by players who troll using WPE, so its out. The apple one is arrow hell; anything where players tend to get trapped because they are surrounded by arrows that kick them back is no good. The red one is also broken by WPE trolls. We accepted the 6th one, which is ugly as hell but we'll make it look ok. The ones after that were sealed and I assume incomplete.
The Sting: For your new lava one, the middle section is very nice. The first section is so-so, the last section is bad. Replace the last part with something else, and improve the first part a bit, and we will probably accept it.
TSF14: It just won't work in Shift. As a holdjump it doesn't work that well, and its too hard for anything else.
Surf: No more waterfalls. The stuff by the waterfall, all of it, is no good. The stuff on the right, and the coin on top, are nice.
Krazyman50: The middle section, both right middle and left middle, is nice. All the stuff on the bottom is lame. Top is too punishing; neither of us got to the top left, because we got bored of falling from the top right.
Megalamb: Too many coins. They're everywhere. Add more arrow shortcuts for speed, mustang digs them.
signinnow: Has potential, but seems raw. Polish it up some more. I would also recommend making it possible to go clockwise or counterclockwise through the rooms, to make it more interesting.
imgood9: Too narrow, too many coins. As a general rule we don't like rooms that are tight and confined.
Beastmode: No to 1, just doesn't work for us. 2 has a coin door and weird traps; not sure how it would play or what the idea is. The red one has potential; make it play a bit smoother, and make the middle coin a bit more readily catchable, its sort of in no-mans land. No to 4th. 5th has nice ideas, but its chaotic, we assume it is unfinished.
I am the one and only: Just kind of sloppy, one of the coins doesn't even appear to be possible, and we already have a lot of rooms of this style. I would recommend a different concept.
Last edited by MIHB (Jun 5 2011 11:39:38 pm)
awesome! thanks guys :DD
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I wonder what cheat they use? Its my first time to see that kind of cheat. :/
Mine...got.....in.....
*heart attack*
Awesomeness....
try mine , the 1 to the right is the newest
http://beta.everybodyedits.com/games/PWALSMhrKSa0I
Here's my next level: I know it says 1 map per person, but I had fun in the making of this level
For the difficulty, I'd say 3.
NOTE: pictures are not entirely accurate, I made a sun, and was too lazy to change the pictures.
Click any of the pictures above to play on the Beta site.
Click here to play on normal website.
Last edited by BorkD (Jun 6 2011 11:56:17 am)
thanks i am working on tweaking the first bit
any tips on how you would make it better?
i have a larger selection of ideas on this level
http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWRVBKCYi7a0I
Last edited by The Sting (Jun 6 2011 9:53:06 am)
K new attempt made, Its really unique and although it seems simple it's alot of fun
click here or on the picture
BETA link
Creators: Borkd and Surf <3
Remember: The coy is watching you
Last edited by Surf (Jun 6 2011 12:45:08 pm)
Mk, I see what you mean. Now, it has many arrows in the Coral section, and a red herring of arrows above.
Btw, before I was trying to kind of sum up my Beta-Only world, Ocean of Dreams.
http://beta.everybodyedits.com/games/PWogMAAA
http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWogMAAA
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