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plat aka kingpooultra

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Something I'm working on

I'm currently working on a world and I need some feedback on my art so far(its not done) http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWAASB9qhqa0I do you like it so far? Does it need more improvement? And there is no minis at the moment

plat aka kingpooultra

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Re: Something I'm working on

*bump* any feedback at all?

Kuech

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Re: Something I'm working on

nice level!

plat aka kingpooultra

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Re: Something I'm working on

thanks! Anything I can improve? and its not done yet.

Kuech

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Re: Something I'm working on

I don't know... it's all good.

plat aka kingpooultra

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Re: Something I'm working on

thanks!:D

Breadfinn

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Re: Something I'm working on

I'm not a big fan of 2D art, but this is nice. The candle look a bit weird and I think you should change one of the chicken a bit, it's completely mirrored.
Good luck with this

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plat aka kingpooultra

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Re: Something I'm working on

thanks Addi, I haven't made a world in a while so yeah...

32OrtonEdge32dh

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Re: Something I'm working on

I'm not sure what it is, but something feels off.   Maybe a bit more shading?

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