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Bobithan

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Bobithan's Adventure

In this world, there is going to be a story that goes along with the map.
Every time you see this:

That means you switch tabs, and go to a document on Google Docs and read the next note, starting from note 1.

http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWpT4vvDUNbEI The world
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Evl … pKKaY/edit The story

For it to look the best, do not open the minimap. It's ugly and it will give spoilers.

So far, there isn't much. Right now I want ideas for the story or how to make it better.

Last edited by Bobithan (Dec 17 2011 7:01:35 pm)

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calculusguy

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Re: Bobithan's Adventure

Seems interesting, but will you post the story here when its done? Or is it too long?

Sleepy

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Re: Bobithan's Adventure

It's nice for now, but you forgot to put a green key inside the neighbour's house.

Bobithan

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Re: Bobithan's Adventure

Seems interesting, but will you post the story here when its done? Or is it too long?

I would post the entire story if this forum supported spoilers, but I guess not. With the Google Document, I can put each note on a separate page which prevents people from looking forward accidentally.

It's nice for now, but you forgot to put a green key inside the neighbour's house.

Oops :3
Fixed

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Added a "Boss Battle" With a slime-thing when you get underground. It's pretty easy, but it's supposed to since it's only the first (Or second if you count the jump across the mysterious hole) actual challenge you will encounter on your journey

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calculusguy

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Re: Bobithan's Adventure

Seems interesting, but will you post the story here when its done? Or is it too long?

I would post the entire story if this forum supported spoilers, but I guess not. With the Google Document, I can put each note on a separate page which prevents people from looking forward accidentally.

It's nice for now, but you forgot to put a green key inside the neighbour's house.

Oops :3
Fixed

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Added a "Boss Battle" With a slime-thing when you get underground. It's pretty easy, but it's supposed to since it's only the first (Or second if you count the jump across the mysterious hole) actual challenge you will encounter on your journey

Maybe mark off sections with black text like this?
--1--
You see a house.
--2--
You go in the house.
--3--
You randomly dissapear.
--4--
Maybe something like that?

Hammy120

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Re: Bobithan's Adventure

Interesting level. I hope it gets finished soon!

D-rock2308

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Re: Bobithan's Adventure

Looks entertaining bro.

Haze123

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Re: Bobithan's Adventure

Wow really cool i finally entered the portal in the center of that circle thingy and i was like whaaat? when i anded back up in the backyard so i hope it gets finished soon!

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Polar

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Re: Bobithan's Adventure

+Rep for the idea, might inspire me to do something like this later. Maybe a YouTube video of an adventure of 'Polar and Friends.' Lol, doubtful. Anyways, I like it.

Haze123

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Re: Bobithan's Adventure

+Rep for the idea, might inspire me to do something like this later. Maybe a YouTube video of an adventure of 'Polar and Friends.' Lol, doubtful. Anyways, I like it.

Ooh can i be in it lol.

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RavaTroll

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Re: Bobithan's Adventure

Damn ! I had the same idea for my KAW level like 5 days ago.
I'm still going to do the same, it's a really nice concept, and I'm glad I'm not the only one who came up with such an idea, actually

BTW, I wanted to write the story in a second post on the forum right after the first, in black text only, and with warnings for the people who were going to write it. I suggest you do the same on you final post in "Rooms", It seemed much easier for me.

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Bobithan

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Re: Bobithan's Adventure

Haven't checked out this topic in a few days, thanks for all the feedback. Nice idea calculusguy/Rava, I'll probably do that for the final draft.

@haze
I think I fixed the portal system, but I might have to redo it because I forgot the IDs of all the portals... again...

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Baticon

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Re: Bobithan's Adventure

This is such an awesome idea.It's the best concept I have ever seen.Really.Nice work,Bobithan.But I am gonna steal it.