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frogsticks

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Hell

Welcome to my post for my level on hell! I have been working on this for about 3 days now without much stopping. I am just working on this by myself so please don't ask if you can help on this one if you want too. Anyways enough yapping on about it... drum role please!... <<< lol?

Normal: http://everybodyedits.com/games/PW9H1PmQb-a0I

Beta: http://beta.everybodyedits.com/games/PW9H1PmQb-a0I

Hope you enjoy it! there are no minis at the moment and it is incomplete, at the moment its just to get it off the ground
Post what you think here. I especially need opinions on what to do up the top!

Frogsticks

Last edited by frogsticks (Jan 2 2012 8:26:51 am)

Panda

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Re: Hell

Should be posted at lvl creations cuz it's not done.

Rooms = lvls that are done

Nice art!

Last edited by Panda (Jan 1 2012 4:16:10 pm)

frogsticks

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Re: Hell

true i see your point... Well if a mod sees this we should probably move this.
other than that thanks

DQIXPlayer

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Re: Hell

idea for the sky: you could have a firestorm or fireballs raining from the sky. or, you could have the devil in the sky absorbing souls. or a swarm of bats. nice level so far btw

frogsticks

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Re: Hell

hmmm... i likw the idea of the firestorm... maybe a tornado or something? i dunno. also thanks for da nice comment

Last edited by frogsticks (Jan 2 2012 5:37:13 am)

DQIXPlayer

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Re: Hell

hallelooyah! his pics r deleted! maybe like a fiery vortex? -brainstorms- :rolleyes:

frogsticks

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Re: Hell

hmmm... that sopunds quite cool

DQIXPlayer

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Re: Hell

sopunds? lol yea i tryed to think of a mix between fire and tornado 1smile1

frogsticks

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Re: Hell

ya.. maybe a fiery vortex with fireballs getting hurled out of it?

it40x

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Re: Hell

Nice art, but it looks very empty.

frogsticks

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Re: Hell

i know it40x its not done... mainly the sky that needs finishing.

EDIT: Picture updated. Fireball has been added.

Last edited by frogsticks (Jan 2 2012 8:25:21 am)

DQIXPlayer

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Re: Hell

wow. one fireball. i am so happy :/ . lol jk nice work. yeah, like a fire whirlpool in the sky hurling out fireballs. maybe also black hole type things and checkpoints? like say u fall into one of the black holes u would be portal'd back to the last checkpoint?

frogsticks

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Re: Hell

so shall i do it about to hit the castle? I like the checkpoint idea. only problem is the blue portal color completely mismatches the red... also what do you saw to a bridge across the lava. If u fall u get reseted.

Haze123

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Joined: 2015-03-09

Posts: 1,691

Re: Hell

Are we gonna finish some of it then we finish What lies beneath? Is it tested?
[EDIT] We should make hard minis and minis in the castle

Last edited by haze123 (Jan 3 2012 11:12:14 pm)

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I are back.

DQIXPlayer

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Re: Hell

you nearly finished it frog? or is this thread just not very active? anyway, maybe could be in it

Breadfinn

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Joined: 2015-02-15

Posts: 2,063

Re: Hell

This looks quite decent, for advice, I dislike the red BGs. They don't look neat. Try replacing them with Red Checker background

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Sed Animus

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Re: Hell

Red checker ruins the in-game look, background should be mostly used for in-game art, not minimap art. Keep going with what you have now I say.

Carter

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Re: Hell

Awesome art, but like said before in the above comments, it's too empty. You should add like floating lava islands or something. Make it look even cooler than it already is.