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guynm

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the fire cave

i didn't finish yet
plz tell how the minis and the art,thx

http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWlJAGMSWbbEI

Sancti

Guest

Re: the fire cave

My opinion, don't take it to hard.

Art - Your fire looks really trolled and just plumped down, you could make more of a system out of fire then just random blocks. Also I don't get the feeling I'm in a cave, actually I'm just bouncing up and down through fire.

To fix this you could redo the art but keep the outlines so you could keep the minis.

Minis - For the small area you have to make minis they're oke. But I don't really like low ceiling gaming.

~Omri~

Guest

Re: the fire cave

My opinion, take it to hard.

Art - Your fire looks really trolled and just plumped down, you could make more of a system out of fire then just random blocks. Also I don't get the feeling I'm in a cave, actually I'm just bouncing up and down through fire.

To fix this you could redo the art but keep the outlines so you could keep the minis.

Minis - For the small area you have to make minis they're oke. But I don't really like low ceiling gaming.

Deetz

Guest

Re: the fire cave

You're mean, it needs work, I'll admit that. There is the problem of there not being a cave, and the art could use more un-trollifying. Other than that, it's good.

Sancti

Guest

Re: the fire cave

I'm not being mean at all actually. When someone asks about my opinion I'd rather give it then twist around it. Constructive feedback is always welcome, right?

Zakleo

Guest

Re: the fire cave

The art was just trolled red bricks. The minis were all the same: ragey and boring. The idea is crap. 1/10

Michal

Member

Joined: 2017-07-04

Posts: 283

Re: the fire cave

Yes I agree with Zakleo the map was all trolled, but the minigames were only a bit good, 4/10