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Master1

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From: Crait

Joined: 2015-02-15

Posts: 4,452

Re: Make your level for EX Crew Shift - Part 2

My 3rd shift level:

http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWpqOoTEJHbEI

The sides might seem a bit boring, that's because I blended them with the theme. The left is Ice so the climb up it is slippery, and the right is fire so I added updrafts.

Overall I'd say it's pretty easy, maybe level 1, or 2.

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Haze123

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Joined: 2015-03-09

Posts: 1,691

Re: Make your level for EX Crew Shift - Part 2

Most rejections are Annoying as hell or boring

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222hockey222

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Re: Make your level for EX Crew Shift - Part 2

I fixed it (I think) with background paths to show where you want to go.

http://everybodyedits.com/games/PW4SOX1AS9a0I

http://beta.everybodyedits.com/games/PW4SOX1AS9a0I

Basically, you try to beat the minigames before someone gets far enough to hit that minigame's key colour. If you don't, you fall to the "slow" area where you have to wait for everyone to finish.

I nerfed it a bunch, now it's a 1-2.

Edit: You should get 4-5 people for the full extent of it.

Last edited by 222hockey222 (Apr 26 2012 4:31:31 pm)

Fdoou

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Re: Make your level for EX Crew Shift - Part 2

222hockey222 the entrance is blocked

EDIT: Now it's not!

Last edited by Fdoou (Apr 25 2012 4:48:37 pm)

MIHB

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Re: Make your level for EX Crew Shift - Part 2

I'm not officially judging, but here is some feedback for a few of the newer levels (so you might be able to improve them before Nou judges them. . .)

Buzzerbee: no commentary, couldn't figure out what was going on

FCDH: Idea isn't bad (wouldn't surprise me if there is already an example of this idea though among the shift levels I'm not familiar with).   However, implementation is pretty annoying.   I would make it easier and do multiple examples of that particular type of trick within the level.  

Fdoou:   I rather like the gameplay of both levels, but they're also both sinfully ugly.   That should be fixable, so, uh, fix it.

Master1: I didn't really like it, kind of dull.   Nou might see it differently.

222Hockey222: I like the fundamental idea, but the trick in the first room is lame and difficult enough that I expect there will be very little actual catching up: one or two people will race ahead easily, and everybody else will be dumped into the slow room.   I would think about redoing the design a little bit to make it riskier to fall behind at all, but easier to keep up.

Fdoou

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Re: Make your level for EX Crew Shift - Part 2

Sinfully ugly? I thought gameplay over art, and I did that.

MIHB

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Re: Make your level for EX Crew Shift - Part 2

Sinfully ugly? I thought gameplay over art, and I did that.

You could easily fix the art without changing the gameplay.

Fdoou

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Re: Make your level for EX Crew Shift - Part 2

That's what I tried to do in my levels. Gameplay first, then I tweaked the art around. I've seen many ugly levels with no form of art whatsoever in shift.

Aedan

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Re: Make your level for EX Crew Shift - Part 2

http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWp4jUdAn2a0I

One on the left maybe a 4 or 5. One on right is a 1 or 2.

Hope you like these ones more than the others.

Haze123

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Joined: 2015-03-09

Posts: 1,691

Re: Make your level for EX Crew Shift - Part 2

Humm... I made this snake fer fun based on your Snake Boss but it's white
EDIT: Forgot the link ^^'
http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWrtVUYrlEbEI

Last edited by haze123 (Apr 28 2012 9:38:56 am)

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iPwner

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From: CaliforNYAN Land.

Joined: 2015-02-15

Posts: 1,514

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Re: Make your level for EX Crew Shift - Part 2

A'right, Nou. :-d I'm not sure if my edits were for the better or the worse... but check out the new and (hopefully) improved version. :s

http://everybodyedits.com/games/PW3OFect9-bEI

~Tee-hee~ ^,^

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RayOfLight

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Re: Make your level for EX Crew Shift - Part 2

My first attempt at a shift level: http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWt4LDUo1DbEI

Powerstars

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Re: Make your level for EX Crew Shift - Part 2

Mine is a 2
http://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL … re=mh_lolz

Aedan

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Re: Make your level for EX Crew Shift - Part 2

Mine is a 2
http://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL … re=mh_lolz

It has to be a level link, something they can play.

Arceus64

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Re: Make your level for EX Crew Shift - Part 2

Mine is a 2
http://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL … re=mh_lolz

It has to be a level link, something they can play.

I think this is the level he wanted us to play: http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWH1XYfyOTbEI

Personal Feedback: Not good level.:( You can do better

Powerstars

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Re: Make your level for EX Crew Shift - Part 2

Mine is a 2
http://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL … re=mh_lolz

It has to be a level link, something they can play.

I think this is the level he wanted us to play: http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWH1XYfyOTbEI

Personal Feedback: Not good level.:( You can do better

Yeah, it was, sorry, I guess I didn't properly copy the link.

Arceus64

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Re: Make your level for EX Crew Shift - Part 2

My levels (finally!):
This first one was supposed to be ready by Easter, but I decided to slow down the process and make changes.

Difficulty: 4
The background was originally orange, but it felt like an eyesore so I changed it. As you can probably tell, a lot of renovation went in the level, but not as much as my next level:

Difficulty: 2
This one was redone about 7 times. At one point, I actually deleted the whole bottom-left
and upper-left. The upper-right went through subtle changes. The only thing I didn't touch was the bottom-right. I decided that not only should the level have multiple routes, but that there should be shortcuts and flow in the design as well.

Hope you enjoy it!

Last edited by Arceus64 (May 21 2012 5:25:52 am)

Fdoou

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Re: Make your level for EX Crew Shift - Part 2

this post has been outdated

Last edited by Fdoou (May 18 2012 2:50:17 pm)

Nou

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Re: Make your level for EX Crew Shift - Part 2

I'll go over the levels somewhere next week, I've been swamped with work.

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ZeldaXD

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Posts: 1,539

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Re: Make your level for EX Crew Shift - Part 2

Level 1: http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWxr4WbOp-bEI
Level 2 (7-15): http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWwLSrEMb0a0I
EDIT: I tested the level 100%
video of the level 7-15
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l5IgWJMsees

Last edited by ZeldaXD (May 21 2012 1:08:38 pm)

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Aprhodite

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Re: Make your level for EX Crew Shift - Part 2

http://everybodyedits.com/games/PW2OLwFYL4a0I <<< NOU!

Jan12345

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Re: Make your level for EX Crew Shift - Part 2

I did make a few levels a long time ago
http://beta.everybodyedits.com/games/PWACRdwsCja0I

Arceus64

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Re: Make your level for EX Crew Shift - Part 2

This side comment is irrelevant to the topic, but I have a good feeling the two posters above me are the same person.

Mini Reviews (Sorry for being quite harsh):

ZeldaXD:
Level 1: I can't even get past the first obstacle. Plus, the coins are in annoying spots
Level 2: Very horrible concept. Very bland and dull, the bottom arrows make the level seem not suitable for Shift, and half the area is covered by letters. Surely, you can do better

Aprhodite:
The art is pretty bad. I tried to look past it, but the concept is horrible, and like Zelda's, I can't get past the first obstacle.

Fdoou

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Re: Make your level for EX Crew Shift - Part 2

You know what? I'm reviewing the levels too.

Buzzerbee: I'm worried nou might not find it fun enough.
FDCH: what level?
Master1: If it might be a bit boring, it might not get in.
222hockey222: I see no problems.
Haze123: [nou] Meh. [/nou]
iPwner: Possibly.
RayOfLight: idk, it's hard.

Arceus64

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Re: Make your level for EX Crew Shift - Part 2

Oh! I almost forgot to put my difficulty rating up. My submission post is now fixed.