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RWithAir

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The Adventure series

Hello everyone,

To start of, this is my first post for a level.

The adventure series is a part of levels that will take you through caverns, woods, mountains etc.

The first level to start is:
http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWHSoRrOu-a0I

This is my first real made level so please give me some comments about what is good and bad and gives some ideas how to improve it.

As I'am not a member it takes me some time to get new levels.
For now i got only 2 but I'am saving right now for the biggest level that is at my desposal.
After that I will take some more normal levels to satisfy you.
So pleae enjoy en help me out,

Beta

Anch

Member

Joined: 2015-02-16

Posts: 5,447

Re: The Adventure series

Positive Comments:
Good level and pretty good art

Negative Comments:
It has very plain color (but at least you told that you don't have many blocks.
The part below is almost impossible besides using a potion.

Comment:
I thought that Beta was a player that was around for a while.

EDIT: Sorry I was thinking of Betta I think...

Last edited by anch159 (Mar 26 2013 7:20:37 am)

RWithAir

Guest

Re: The Adventure series

Thank you very much for taking time to comment.
I will try to make the caves a little bit more easier and maybe more of them instead of a few large ones.
Thank you for the commenting!

BlazingZelda

Guest

Re: The Adventure series

Nice level. At some parts It's I little too easy to go back to the beginning which may lead to player frustration. The actual paths seem to be walking through a tunnel and going on side tunnels to get coins with an occasional hook jump.   The art's better than anything I would be able to do. Good job; I look forward to the rest of the adventure levels.

RWithAir

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Re: The Adventure series

@BlazingZelda

Thank you verry much for your reply. If you have anny ideas on how to make my worlds anny better I will change it directly like mins or some sort.
Thanks for playing so much!
Beta