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dutchtimNL

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[WIP]Xpedition Amazone (+Images)

So, I suddently got the idea of making a jungle level. I have been wanting to make a jungle for a long time, but never found a way to. I wanted to make it with a great challange and art.
I made a sketch in a great saved world, and started building a design inside my world.

The shape of the map:

After half an hour the shape of the map was finished, and I made the design ingame:

The E is supposed to be the entrance to the underground dungeon, ending with a well or something in the town.

Also, thanks to the people who helped me making (parts of) the level:
-Riffael (For filling brown bricks, knowing what had to be done, without he had chat!)
-GHJKHTJYKULUY (For filling brown bricks and stalking me all the time, haha!)

I hope you guys like it so far, and would love to gain help!
Feedback is always welcome!
~Dutch

Level link: http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWvI9UitWibEI

Last edited by dutchtimNL (Apr 5 2013 3:30:44 am)

Koya

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Re: [WIP]Xpedition Amazone (+Images)

Don't hate me for what I am about to say:
- Not much jungle in a jungle world.
- Jungles don't have round topped trees.
- There needs to be more water on top of the waterfall.
- The water has a repeating pattern.
- I'm not fond of the island.,
- Put the town in the jungle, wooden huts (small under towering trees)
- Tall trees.

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Thank you eleizibeth ^

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