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Feedback on Tree

I made this tree for one of my upcoming worlds. I would like user feedback. Good or Bad. Tell me why you hate it or love and what I need to do to make it look better. By the way these are two trees next to each other.
Link to world if you want to look for yourself: http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWGpk0FTDpa0I

Thanks I really appreciate it!

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Alexthementalone

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Re: Feedback on Tree

Trees should be shorter. Also your design needs more shading, check out Deetz texture tutorial. Alternatively, if you're looking for tutorials to enhance your art, please click here!

/Alex

Last edited by Alexthementalone (Jul 20 2014 1:32:55 am)

Fdoou

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Re: Feedback on Tree

NOPE. You've never seen a jungle before, have ya, alex?

Koto

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Re: Feedback on Tree

it should be darker, also don't use keys for art.

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Anch

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Re: Feedback on Tree

Trunks are never straight.

Alexthementalone

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NOPE. You've never seen a jungle before, have ya, alex?

Ok, trees can be shorter...

/Alex

Fdoou

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if ya see a short tree in a jungle, it's a DEAD TREE!

Alexthementalone

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Re: Feedback on Tree

if ya see a short tree in a jungle, it's a DEAD TREE!

EE does not need to follow physical principles (e.g a tree decaying).

/Alex

skullz17

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Re: Feedback on Tree

Why are the leaves on the branches all behind the branches? It looks really weird.

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Alexthementalone

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Re: Feedback on Tree

Link to world if you want to look for yourself: http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWGpk0FTDpa0I

Thanks I really appreciate it!

When I went into the world, you had put a grey line across the world so I could not see it normally, how can we see the shading technique you used and suggest improvements upon that.

/Alex

Anch

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Fdoou

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Re: Feedback on Tree

When I went into the world, you had put a grey line across the world so I could not see it normally, how can we see the shading technique you used and suggest improvements upon that.

/Alex

i take it you did not read or look at the op, did you

lrussell

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Re: Feedback on Tree

http://titanshell.com/~lrussell/ee_tool … rlay=false

You and your manual URL editing, somehow managing to break it by setting it to false. There's a form for a reason! Regardless, I fixed it.

Anch

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http://titanshell.com/~lrussell/ee_tool … rlay=false

You and your manual URL editing, somehow managing to break it by setting it to false. There's a form for a reason! Regardless, I fixed it.

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I didn't know what the form did and I was too lazy to go back a page and for it to load and stuff.
So what do the two options mean?

lrussell

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Re: Feedback on Tree

http://titanshell.com/~lrussell/ee_tool … rlay=false

You and your manual URL editing, somehow managing to break it by setting it to false. There's a form for a reason! Regardless, I fixed it.

:3
I didn't know what the form did and I was too lazy to go back a page and for it to load and stuff.
So what do the two options mean?

One compresses the PNG with lossy post-processing for a smaller file but it's slower. The other one overlays the world name and owner at the top left.