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Different55

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Re: BEE's Guide to EE Art [Palettes, Pics, & More!]

oooOOOooh... Nice job.

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Chimi

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Re: BEE's Guide to EE Art [Palettes, Pics, & More!]

Bee should get a trophy for being so awesome

Bossking

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Re: BEE's Guide to EE Art [Palettes, Pics, & More!]

@Different55

Plz come to tinychat/gocrew

I can help u with ur palletes
Lets talk there ok?

Different55

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Re: BEE's Guide to EE Art [Palettes, Pics, & More!]

I'm still waiting...

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Re: BEE's Guide to EE Art [Palettes, Pics, & More!]

Sorry im there now

Different55

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Re: BEE's Guide to EE Art [Palettes, Pics, & More!]

but I'm not

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Fir3Fli3

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Re: BEE's Guide to EE Art [Palettes, Pics, & More!]

Hey Bee, can you help us (the GO! Crew) with our new level, a 3d city, meet us in tinychat.com/gocrew
Tnx =]

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Re: BEE's Guide to EE Art [Palettes, Pics, & More!]

If you link me to the level I will gladly give feedback, but every time i visit any tinychat, no one there

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Different55

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Re: BEE's Guide to EE Art [Palettes, Pics, & More!]

Can you give me feedback on this level?
http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWSrHScy54a0I
After the rocket I'm going to put stars and have minis up there.

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BEE

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Re: BEE's Guide to EE Art [Palettes, Pics, & More!]

Hahah I love it!

I even was able to play it (til i got stuck in the N cause I fail at jumpin )

Art feedback, honestly youre a great artist I dont even think you need to come to me for feedback lol. A lot of what you do is simply stylistically different than me, that doesnt make it wrong. I love how you are able to depict movement, that is very difficult to do. Only thing I have to say is that with that many cracks in a boat, there are sure to be pieces in the water itself, or the boat on fire or something (especially if theres comets hitting it =O)

I also, feel like the bottom crack is obviously a path, simply add more black cracks to make it look more a part of the art, rather than black as the place to walk and grey being the other cracks in the boat (I hope this makes sense let me know if it doesnt)

Otherwise Im going to guess that you will add texture to the sea and top of the boat, so Ill let you do that before I give any feedback. Loving the way you drew the comet, but dont forget that comets have quite a long tail from the light they burn in the sky, maybe red keys or crowns to make the tail a bit longer.

Oh, and is that rocketship landed in lava or are they taking off? I wasnt sure seeing as it looks like its incomplete =P

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Re: BEE's Guide to EE Art [Palettes, Pics, & More!]

I don't have tinychat

BEE

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Thats okay,   you dont need one.If you want me to give feedback on a level jsut post the level link here

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Dont believe this thread! I have proof Bee is not what she says she is!

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Re: BEE's Guide to EE Art [Palettes, Pics, & More!]

Ohnoes, youve caught me, Im a nub =O

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Ohnoes, youve caught me, Im a nub =O

Not only THAT!

You poach too!

Different55

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Re: BEE's Guide to EE Art [Palettes, Pics, & More!]

Hahah I love it!

I even was able to play it (til i got stuck in the N cause I fail at jumpin )

Art feedback, honestly youre a great artist I dont even think you need to come to me for feedback lol.
Yes i do.

I love how you are able to depict movement, that is very difficult to do.
How I exactly do I do that? Can you tell me? Because I didn't even know that was possible

Only thing I have to say is that with that many cracks in a boat, there are sure to be pieces in the water itself, or the boat on fire or something (especially if theres comets hitting it =O)
Tried, but I thought it looked like ice so I deleted it until I found some other reason the boat was in pieces. Now I have a comet.

I also, feel like the bottom crack is obviously a path, simply add more black cracks to make it look more a part of the art, rather than black as the place to walk and grey being the other cracks in the boat (I hope this makes sense let me know if it doesnt)
Makes sense

Oh, and is that rocketship landed in lava or are they taking off? I wasnt sure seeing as it looks like its incomplete =P
Taking off

Me = Red BEE = Something else.

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Re: BEE's Guide to EE Art [Palettes, Pics, & More!]

I love how you are able to depict movement, that is very difficult to do.
How I exactly do I do that? Can you tell me? Because I didn't even know that was possible

Then you must be a natural! The first step to depicting motion is picking your subject matter. For example, comparing your boat disaster to my peanut butter, your boat already has movement just by the fact that its an event that is depicted, not just an object.

Secondly the key is to find a "time" in the event where the event is still taking place (ie: it has started yet not finished) and take a "snapshot" of that. Which you have done by making the boat crackING apart (not completely whole and not completely broken)

Thirdly its all in the details. Look at that table, the lamp the chairs and the comet. The fact that the hull is fillING up with water, but not all the way full. Even the cracks show that not only are they there but they are actually still developing!
As for the piecefs breaking off, dont worry about it. You can put a few in but if it doesnt work because of the limited colors we have, then not much you can do about that,

And btw, lol, you dont have to give me a + rep every time i give you feedback XD

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Re: BEE's Guide to EE Art [Palettes, Pics, & More!]

It's good feedback and I +rep people multiple times for being very helpful like xDevilx and the modded animator or you and the palletes. And thanks for teaching me something I didn't know I knew how to do.

EDIT: One more post and I'll have 2012 posts.

Last edited by Different55 (Mar 1 2011 12:47:08 pm)

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kitty45

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Re: BEE's Guide to EE Art [Palettes, Pics, & More!]

Thats okay,   you dont need one.If you want me to give feedback on a level jsut post the level link here

I made a thread in level creation (name cat)

Different55

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Re: BEE's Guide to EE Art [Palettes, Pics, & More!]

So I'll start working on my level again and post when I need more feedback. Thanks for the feedback.... again.

And BTW, before I even posted the link I had gotten a magic coin XD. There were 10 of them and the 10th one was magic

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Re: BEE's Guide to EE Art [Palettes, Pics, & More!]

@Different55

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Re: BEE's Guide to EE Art [Palettes, Pics, & More!]

Not done yet. I'll fix it so people can play it and put a temp win crown and a couple coins while I'm building it. Done with the next part.
http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWSrHScy54a0I
Can you give me some more feedback, BEE? And with the 99-coin coin door, I'm going to drop off people at the beginning after the rocket/space part and then they go back through that last big part of ship to the win zone. I just started on the stars and I will be adding constellations and galaxies up there.

Last edited by Different55 (Mar 2 2011 12:59:37 am)

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kitty45

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Re: BEE's Guide to EE Art [Palettes, Pics, & More!]

http://eeforumify.com/viewtopic.php?id=4736 Can you look at my world (it is in the topic

BEE

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Re: BEE's Guide to EE Art [Palettes, Pics, & More!]

Im sorry katt, I fail very much for keep forgetting, Ill giv eyou a + rep to tide yuo over til tonight when I have time to look at it.

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Re: BEE's Guide to EE Art [Palettes, Pics, & More!]

ok it's ok