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haythere

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4 Seasons

http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWHYIkS9ZSa0I
So far its incomplete but go ahead and give me feedback if you'd like :3

Last edited by haythere (Jan 4 2011 5:45:42 pm)

71TheRoman

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Re: 4 Seasons

*thoughts as I first enter level* Okay, four seasons. This guy wants a review, I'll give him a review. ... Huh? Black mini games? Gee, never seen that before *opens minimap* HOLY FRYFISH!! Pretty tree! (closest to crying sprite I could use) ... Alright, some of these jumps involve some thinking, but there aren't hard. ... Wait,

what's with those blocks on the right? Is that suppose to be a red herring? Seems a little excessive. ... Ha ha! A little arrow wall cannot stop me! ... And I'm the King! Hoo-rah!

Well, that was pretty enjoyable. If you can build on what you've made so far, and don't make the mini games too difficult, I see a lot more visits in your future.

NikK

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Re: 4 Seasons

Is that the level you were working in?

Well, it's a good level, with good art, a pretty good art and level idea, it's challenging, still not frustrating, but, it's short, that made me kinda sad

So let's make some mathematical things

Art - 95%
Art Idea - 85%
Level itself - 85%
Level idea - 80%
Difficulty - 65% (Beign 100% nearly impossible and 0% easy as pie, so it would be, like I said, challenging, still not frustrating, so to make the maths I'll put 90%)
Lenght - 60%

Overall - 82,5% (Pretty good!)

I really enjoyed playing it

71TheRoman

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Re: 4 Seasons

NO! I forgot to exit the level! Now everybody can see the proof of how easily bested I was!

At least I was dethroned by the most honorable of ninja.

haythere

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Re: 4 Seasons

*thoughts as I first enter level* Okay, four seasons. This guy wants a review, I'll give him a review. ... Huh? Black mini games? Gee, never seen that before *opens minimap* HOLY FRYFISH!! Pretty tree! (closest to crying sprite I could use) ... Alright, some of these jumps involve some thinking, but there aren't hard. ... Wait,
http://img42.imageshack.us/img42/7145/demoszf.jpg
what's with those blocks on the right? Is that suppose to be a red herring? Seems a little excessive. ... Ha ha! A little arrow wall cannot stop me! ... And I'm the King! Hoo-rah!
http://img403.imageshack.us/img403/5641/demol.jpg

Well, that was pretty enjoyable. If you can build on what you've made so far, and don't make the mini games too difficult, I see a lot more visits in your future.

Yeah i stuffed up with that minigame, i thought i fixed it though :/ i must have forgotten to save it

haythere

Guest

Re: 4 Seasons

Is that the level you were working in?

Well, it's a good level, with good art, a pretty good art and level idea, it's challenging, still not frustrating, but, it's short, that made me kinda sad

So let's make some mathematical things

Art - 95%
Art Idea - 85%
Level itself - 85%
Level idea - 80%
Difficulty - 65% (Beign 100% nearly impossible and 0% easy as pie, so it would be, like I said, challenging, still not frustrating, so to make the maths I'll put 90%)
Lenght - 60%

Overall - 82,5% (Pretty good!)

http://img837.imageshack.us/img837/7113 … asonsi.jpg

I really enjoyed playing it

Yeah, i ran out of ideas near the end so ive been lurking other worlds for ideas, sadly the majority of levels are super easy, or maybe im just pro