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CHA Crew Yoshi

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Chewy

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Re: CHA Crew Yoshi

3/5 The art is good but there's too many hook jumps and you need to add coins.

Last edited by Chewy (Jan 27 2011 3:05:44 pm)

Lopoi2

Guest

Re: CHA Crew Yoshi

I hate this high jumps:

If I win it I post here the image, but good level.

NikK

Guest

Re: CHA Crew Yoshi

Yea, you should take away 1 or two hook jumps and this:

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Because it's hard sometimes. This time I finished that 1st try, but nearly always I have to stay there a couple of minutes.

Anyways, the art is good, and like Chewy said, coins would give people a motivation.

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I hate this high jumps:
http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/7467/img106wg.jpg
If I win it I post here the image, but good level.

Yea, I saw you there

Last edited by NikK (Jan 27 2011 3:12:30 pm)

Lopoi2

Guest

Re: CHA Crew Yoshi

Yea, you should take away 1 or two hook jumps and this:

     l
     l
     l
  ^l
Because it's hard sometimes. This time I finished that 1st try, but nearly always I have to stay there a couple of minutes.

Anyways, the art is good, and like Chewy said, coins would give people a motivation.

http://bit.ly/gnY7HH

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I hate this high jumps:
http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/7467/img106wg.jpg
If I win it I post here the image, but good level.

Yea, I saw you there

High jumps are not difficult when you have space, but with just one space to run is totally difficult. You are lucky.

NikK

Guest

Re: CHA Crew Yoshi

Yea, you should take away 1 or two hook jumps and this:

     l
     l
     l
  ^l
Because it's hard sometimes. This time I finished that 1st try, but nearly always I have to stay there a couple of minutes.

Anyways, the art is good, and like Chewy said, coins would give people a motivation.

http://bit.ly/gnY7HH

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I hate this high jumps:
http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/7467/img106wg.jpg
If I win it I post here the image, but good level.

Yea, I saw you there

High jumps are not difficult when you have space, but with just one space to run is totally difficult. You are lucky.

Yea, thats what I meant, and thats why the "drawing" of the high jump has only one space. And yea, I'm lucky

Different55

Forum Admin

Joined: 2015-02-07

Posts: 16,575

Re: CHA Crew Yoshi

Yeah, a couple less hook jumps would be good. Other than that, great art and nice world. You draw it by hand?

And this is the hardest type of high jump:
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Actually, its kinda impossible .

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