Official Everybody Edits Forums

Greenzoid2

Guest

Forest Fire by Greenzoid2

OK, This is a new level I have been working on for the last 2 days(about 3 hours of work), and this is how it's turned out. I'd like some advice on what I should change. I know the art isn't the best, but I tried

constructive criticism and compliments only please.

this            ^            minigame is where many people are getting stuck, but I am not changing it, because it is very easy once you know what you have to do. I couldn't do it at first for a while, but I eventually found out the strategy and I make it every 3rd try at least.

I am bad at clipping the picture

I do this every time! Almost..

Last edited by greenzoid2 (Feb 9 2011 7:13:37 pm)

Y0shii

Guest

Re: Forest Fire by Greenzoid2

ok i got 25 coins but i dont know where to get the other 5 help?

Y0shii

Guest

Re: Forest Fire by Greenzoid2

oh nvm i found it i have all 30 coins, nice job hiding it in the trees at the bottom
great map!

Greenzoid2

Guest

Re: Forest Fire by Greenzoid2

thank you

Is there anything you disliked about it?

Pyromaniac

Official Caroler

Joined: 2015-02-15

Posts: 4,868

Re: Forest Fire by Greenzoid2

(double post...)

D-rock2308

Guest

Re: Forest Fire by Greenzoid2

(double post...)

Useless post......

Anyway it looks great. I'll go ahead and add it too our level links. I'll play it when I have a chance.
Edit: Played it. It was pretty fun, even got a 10 energy magiccoin (even though I never spent my energy yet -.-) overall pretty fun. Smoke part was annoying, and the farthest right tree looks undone.

Last edited by D-rock2308 (Feb 10 2011 3:50:05 pm)

JadElClemens

Member

From: Colorado, USA

Joined: 2015-02-15

Posts: 4,559

Re: Forest Fire by Greenzoid2

good level, but I was lagging too bad to enjoy it

---

I hate tall signatures.

Greenzoid2

Guest

Re: Forest Fire by Greenzoid2

I changed how the tree to the far right looks and fixed the smoke so if you fall you don't restart all or most of it. I did try putting actual minigames there but I couldn't do anything I liked while keeping the smoke how I wanted it to look.

Randomdude

Guest

Re: Forest Fire by Greenzoid2

finished it.

Greenzoid2

Guest

Re: Forest Fire by Greenzoid2

Great! Was there any part of it that needs improving?

Chessehunta

Guest

Re: Forest Fire by Greenzoid2

Sorry, i just wanted to see the pic

Codfoshie

Member

Joined: 2015-02-15

Posts: 686

Re: Forest Fire by Greenzoid2

Nice map, Was quite fun to beat

Minis: 7/10
Art: 8/10

Overall: 7.5/10