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supadorf24

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Easter Blast 2011 -- Quest for the Three Golden Eggs: Laser Edition

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I can't get on my computer right now so I'm posting this with my iPod. Thus, a lack of screenie. Anyway, yeah. Play the level. Comment, I guess. And, thank you very much, I'm aware that I'm not in the top five. Well, who knows? Maybe the judges will appreciate my sense of humor. I've got some things going for me. Longest level name. Most original theme. Most lasers. Well, okay then. Enjoy. It's a short level. All made by me.

EDIT: I thought I should also tell you, the text was no uploaded. But it did take a while to make. I used real text as a reference and did my best to synthesize it.

Last edited by Supadorf24 (Apr 17 2011 12:04:46 am)

Chimi

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Re: Easter Blast 2011 -- Quest for the Three Golden Eggs: Laser Edition

Hold down the Home button and tap the power button to take a screenie. It should send one to your pictures.

supadorf24

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Re: Easter Blast 2011 -- Quest for the Three Golden Eggs: Laser Edition

Hold down the Home button and tap the power button to take a screenie. It should send one to your pictures.

I know how to take a screenie, but Flash Player doesn't work on iPods, so I can't go to my level or edit it.

D-rock2308

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Re: Easter Blast 2011 -- Quest for the Three Golden Eggs: Laser Edition

AMG Bunnies w/ lasers. I ragequit because I didn't want to get owned.

supadorf24

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Re: Easter Blast 2011 -- Quest for the Three Golden Eggs: Laser Edition

Thanks for the feedback...?

Tako

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Re: Easter Blast 2011 -- Quest for the Three Golden Eggs: Laser Edition

Since EE isn't working; is this the level with the unicorn-admins pooping a rainbow and destroying the moon...?

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Yeah, well, you know that's just like, uh, your opinion, man.

supadorf24

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Re: Easter Blast 2011 -- Quest for the Three Golden Eggs: Laser Edition

What? No. I showed you this level in it's very early stages. It has rabbits with lasers.

supadorf24

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Re: Easter Blast 2011 -- Quest for the Three Golden Eggs: Laser Edition

I'm going to bump this because no one has given me any feedback.

Allie

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Re: Easter Blast 2011 -- Quest for the Three Golden Eggs: Laser Edition

The art seems a little inconsistent; you need to focus on one theme. There's ground above the bunnies, but that seems random. Maybe a battle arena or other bunnies watching them would be more appropriate? At the top, there is a single cloud with a candle on it, and an egg smiley that doesn't fit in with the style of artwork you're using. I think the bunnies could be improved, maybe you could use Google images to find a reference pic. It was kind of unclear what to do at the start, and I found it tedious how every time you dropped down to the fire, you had to go back to the right of the screen to get back up. The minis were nice, and I liked the ground and the fire. The "Happy Easter" also looks really nice. Minis were good. Overall, it has a lot of potential. Sorry if I was harsh - I do think it's a great level.

Wezza

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Re: Easter Blast 2011 -- Quest for the Three Golden Eggs: Laser Edition

where the 2 lasers connected you should've made an laser egg (: didn't play much of the mini's cause a lack of time and DDR3

D-rock2308

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Re: Easter Blast 2011 -- Quest for the Three Golden Eggs: Laser Edition

Thanks for the feedback...?

(It was so awesome I had to ragequit)

^Translation.

supadorf24

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Re: Easter Blast 2011 -- Quest for the Three Golden Eggs: Laser Edition

The art seems a little inconsistent; you need to focus on one theme. There's ground above the bunnies, but that seems random. Maybe a battle arena or other bunnies watching them would be more appropriate? At the top, there is a single cloud with a candle on it, and an egg smiley that doesn't fit in with the style of artwork you're using. I think the bunnies could be improved, maybe you could use Google images to find a reference pic. It was kind of unclear what to do at the start, and I found it tedious how every time you dropped down to the fire, you had to go back to the right of the screen to get back up. The minis were nice, and I liked the ground and the fire. The "Happy Easter" also looks really nice. Minis were good. Overall, it has a lot of potential. Sorry if I was harsh - I do think it's a great level.

Constructive criticism is always welcome!

MIHB

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Re: Easter Blast 2011 -- Quest for the Three Golden Eggs: Laser Edition

Sweet lazorz pew pew pew

Lugnuts, if you're out there, you should take notes.