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#1 Before February 2015

Bossking
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Egg Factory by GO! Crew

Hey guys, here is our contest level, have fun playing it.

Egg Factory GO!
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Ps: If u win pm me the secret and you will get into winners list.

Winners -
-Jaa
-Cyph1e
-Max
-Tokebot
-NewComer
-Nou

Thats all guys, good luck.

Last edited by Bossking (Apr 16 2011 6:24:25 pm)

#2 Before February 2015

Deadlord
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Joined: 2015-04-06
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Re: Egg Factory by GO! Crew

Finaly were finished ^^ *claps*

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#3 Before February 2015

JadElClemens
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From: Colorado, USA
Joined: 2015-02-15
Posts: 4,559

Re: Egg Factory by GO! Crew

-.-
are you kidding me? Gah, this is the level that sparked the discussion that eventually made our leader quit? I like the concept, too...


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#4 Before February 2015

Bossking
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Re: Egg Factory by GO! Crew

JadElClemens wrote:

-.-
are you kidding me? Gah, this is the level that sparked the discussion that eventually made our leader quit? I like the concept, too...

Seriously, what are you talking about =S

#5 Before February 2015

Different55
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Joined: 2015-02-07
Posts: 16,575

Re: Egg Factory by GO! Crew

THIS is Go! Crew's entry? I have to say I am seriously disappointed. Not even a great saved world //forums.everybodyedits.com/img/smilies/smile

Last edited by Different55 (Apr 14 2011 7:47:10 pm)


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#6 Before February 2015

Shy Guy
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Re: Egg Factory by GO! Crew

Interesting layout, but indeed lacking effort.

#7 Before February 2015

JadElClemens
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From: Colorado, USA
Joined: 2015-02-15
Posts: 4,559

Re: Egg Factory by GO! Crew

Bossking wrote:
JadElClemens wrote:

-.-
are you kidding me? Gah, this is the level that sparked the discussion that eventually made our leader quit? I like the concept, too...

Seriously, what are you talking about =S

read:

Different55 wrote:

THIS is Go! Crew's entry? I have to say I am seriously disappointed. Not even a great world //forums.everybodyedits.com/img/smilies/smile

It caused my leader to quit and rejoin on a different map, and I'm kinda disappointed that it couldn't have been something a little more impressive. Still, best of luck to you.


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#8 Before February 2015

Different55
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Joined: 2015-02-07
Posts: 16,575

Re: Egg Factory by GO! Crew

JadElClemens wrote:
Bossking wrote:
JadElClemens wrote:

-.-
are you kidding me? Gah, this is the level that sparked the discussion that eventually made our leader quit? I like the concept, too...

Seriously, what are you talking about =S

read:

Different55 wrote:

THIS is Go! Crew's entry? I have to say I am seriously disappointed. Not even a great world //forums.everybodyedits.com/img/smilies/smile

It caused my leader to quit and rejoin on a different map, and I'm kinda disappointed that it couldn't have been something a little more impressive. Still, best of luck to you.

lol I meant Great World as Great saved world. changed. It's a fun world, but I was expecting something WOW from GO! Crew. The minis are great, a itty bitty bit too easy, but it's the art the kinda disappointed me.

Last edited by Different55 (Apr 14 2011 7:54:06 pm)


"Sometimes failing a leap of faith is better than inching forward"
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#9 Before February 2015

MIHB
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Re: Egg Factory by GO! Crew

I think this could be a very nice level, but the black box mini layout and the mediocre art kind of kill it imo.

Last edited by MIHB (Apr 14 2011 8:07:03 pm)

#10 Before February 2015

Jeremy
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Re: Egg Factory by GO! Crew

I finished it. But as they all said, the art isn't that much creative. But I still like the minis.

#11 Before February 2015

Codfoshie
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Joined: 2015-02-15
Posts: 686

Re: Egg Factory by GO! Crew

Mihb, I take responsibility for the minis as I did all but 2.5 of them, but that is the only way I do my minis, as I usually have no art, so it would have probably sucked more, if i tried to do it, without the blackbox styled minis.

However, Please do not rip into this map, It is not really nice peeps, as well as, it is better than some entries, Although, constructive criticism is welcomed.

The artists, did their best, Yea, they are not as good as say bee, ravatroll or megalamb, but they are still pretty good.

The minis arent meant to be "Hard" per se, but I tried to make them fun, and easy once you know how to beat them.

And different55, If the world was a 400x200, I would of had my work on minis so rushed, it would have been pretty bad, and I would have no rest from it, and probably wouldn't be done in time, unless there was more art in the map.

We (Bossking, Deadlord, Areus, F1r3fl13, and I) did our best in the alloted time.

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#12 Before February 2015

Pyromaniac
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Joined: 2015-02-15
Posts: 4,868

Re: Egg Factory by GO! Crew

Eedd. U can't blame people for giving critcism.

I also agree.. The art was dissapointing:. It used to little space.. And the minis were box minis.

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#13 Before February 2015

tokebot
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Re: Egg Factory by GO! Crew

lots of strange critisism here.

i like this map best in the contest so far
i think the map has some interesting jumps a neat concept and was fun to play. Normally i hate black borders but if the games are good, whatevs.

i can say that from a neutral standpoint as someone who doesn't have to compete with the map in a contest *hint hint*

#14 Before February 2015

Codfoshie
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Joined: 2015-02-15
Posts: 686

Re: Egg Factory by GO! Crew

Strange that most of it is from one crew... MX, but haters are gonna hate, i cant really change that.

Bossking, F1r3fl13, deadlord and areus arent exactly the best artists, but they did their bests, but i dont see why you are totally slating the art, yes, it is minimal, but who said it has to be filled with art? Atleast the minis werent a side project. ;P

And as stated before, I am not used to making minis in strange shapes around art, as most of mine are rectangular, as i never worked in a map that included art.

I know this probably wont get in the top 5 maps, but top 10 would be nice.

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#15 Before February 2015

Fir3Fli3
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Re: Egg Factory by GO! Crew

I'm so sorry I couldn't help //forums.everybodyedits.com/img/smilies/smile
And about the critcism, I understand it, with art, this isn't our best level. :/

#16 Before February 2015

MRBOOGAWESOME
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Re: Egg Factory by GO! Crew

ya go crews levels r usually AWESOME but this on is nothing like the others.

#17 Before February 2015

MIHB
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Re: Egg Factory by GO! Crew

Doctor_downes wrote:

Mihb, I take responsibility for the minis as I did all but 2.5 of them, but that is the only way I do my minis, as I usually have no art, so it would have probably sucked more, if i tried to do it, without the blackbox styled minis.

We (Bossking, Deadlord, Areus, F1r3fl13, and I) did our best in the alloted time.

EEDD, there is nothing wrong with the minis themselves per se, its just the style doesn't fit in with the look of the level.   Its really too late to fix that, but in the future you might want to choose level designs knowing how you work.   (Theres a reason we do a lot of castles, cause they are filled with boxes).

As for the art, I wouldn't have criticized except YOU HAVE MORE TIME TO WORK ON IT (deadline is now tomorrow night I believe).   I'd make the best of that time to add shading and such.   There is no reason at all for the ground to be brown with a layer of green on top, just as an example.   Obvious flaws such as that detract from some of the more nuanced shading you do have in the level.

Last edited by MIHB (Apr 15 2011 9:15:00 am)

#18 Before February 2015

Different55
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Joined: 2015-02-07
Posts: 16,575

Re: Egg Factory by GO! Crew

Please take MIHB's advice he's putting my thoughts into words better than I am.


"Sometimes failing a leap of faith is better than inching forward"
- ShinsukeIto

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#19 Before February 2015

Fir3Fli3
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Re: Egg Factory by GO! Crew

Believe it or not, but we are making another easter level!
If it's gonna be better we will submit that one!

#20 Before February 2015

Different55
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Joined: 2015-02-07
Posts: 16,575

Re: Egg Factory by GO! Crew

^^ YAY! I'm sure it's going to be better.


"Sometimes failing a leap of faith is better than inching forward"
- ShinsukeIto

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#21 Before February 2015

Pyromaniac
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Joined: 2015-02-15
Posts: 4,868

Re: Egg Factory by GO! Crew

Eedd... Lol two people criticized from mx... The rest were NOT in it.... Lolol nice counting.

And who said critisicm was bad? It's just trying to get you to make better levels!! Gorsh lol people get so angry over nothin lol

and fir3 knows I love go crew! So eedd please chilllax

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#22 Before February 2015

Fir3Fli3
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Re: Egg Factory by GO! Crew

I made better grass and did much minor changes:

BEFORE:                                                        AFTER:
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Last edited by Fir3Fli3 (Apr 16 2011 3:09:22 am)

#23 Before February 2015

D-rock2308
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Re: Egg Factory by GO! Crew

Fir3Fli3 wrote:

I made better grass and did much minor changes:

BEFORE:                                                        AFTER:
http://i.imgur.com/rIrML.pnghttp://i.imgur.com/ua2nF.png

Looks a ton better. Nice!

#24 Before February 2015

DK Levels
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Re: Egg Factory by GO! Crew

Poor bunny thats forced to push the cart :/
Nice level though, I enjoyed the mini's Ive managed to play //forums.everybodyedits.com/img/smilies/smile

#25 Before February 2015

Newcomer
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Re: Egg Factory by GO! Crew

completed it -> the minis are very hard, too hard for my taste exspecially the second last one. Pls make it next time a little bit easier i dont want to play 4 hours for it //forums.everybodyedits.com/img/smilies/wink

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