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#1 Before February 2015

Aoitenshi
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Joined: 2015-02-18
Posts: 2,058

Aoitenshi's 'This Map Sucks' Map

Note: I Am Noob, I like RPGs.

Challenge Map:

Small Sized

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EHChallenge 1
Time to Work: 25 Minutes
Helper: FacebookDanny
Genre: Minigames, 1-Mistake-Die
Description: A Small Challenge With Annoying Hook Jumps.
Picture:
1YX2
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Large Sized

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Automatic Stairs
Time to Work: 3 Hours
Genre: Stair, Unique
Description: The Stair is powered by my AFK alt.
Picture:
221T
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Massive Sized

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OSPlatformer RPG 1
Time to Work: 3 Days
Helper: Stevefox74, Doshiegg
Genre: Platformer, Minigames
Description: First map ever made, 7 Levels of RPG and A Level of Minis.
Picture:
1U38
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Please Tell me How Should I improve These maps.

Last edited by Aoitenshi (May 14 2011 3:45:18 am)

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#2 Before February 2015

D-rock2308
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Re: Aoitenshi's 'This Map Sucks' Map

Well, before I even enter, I look at the minimap and say:

"Box minis, alright, I don't like those at all"
Solution: Make minigames more open ended, not cramped in one space

"I see the bottom two rows in about every level I look into now"
Solution: Be More original, add COOL art, not sprites, and have it open to the world. This goes back to my first solution, make cool art that you can play on, they will be more open, no boxes. (NO DON'T MAKE BLACK BOXES, THEY STILL ARE BOX MINIGAMES)

"Your art is shaded terribly"
Solution: See these threads:
http://eeforumify.com/viewtopic.php?id=2305
http://eeforumify.com/viewtopic.php?id=3568

Now you don't have to read through it all, but these can help alot.

"I see mario related stuff"
Solution: This is a practical no-no. If your going to copy mario, do it in an original way, and copy it exactly from the game.

"The PLAYS Sign"
Solution: I'm not saying it's terrible, but it could be smaller and give you more room in your world.

I'm going to play the level now. Then I can give more advice.

EDIT: DONE! After playing the level I thought:

"EWWW Hook jumps there were a ton"
Solution: Make something more original, here, this helps:

http://eeforumify.com/viewtopic.php?id=19
http://eeforumify.com/viewtopic.php?id=6985

"Coin spam..."
Solution: Too many blue coins, take them out. I don't like hearing a ring sound every few seconds. Under 100 would be good.

"repetitive minigames"
Solution: The Air and water levels were alot alike. mix it up a little bit. (Also, hooks are very repetitive)

The map was better than my first, so grats to you. It all comes with practice.

Last edited by D-rock2308 (May 6 2011 10:30:11 am)

#3 Before February 2015

Cyclopsicle
Guest

Re: Aoitenshi's 'This Map Sucks' Map

D-rock2308 wrote:

Well, before I even enter, I look at the minimap and say:

"Box minis, alright, I don't like those at all"
Solution: Make minigames more open ended, not cramped in one space

"I see the bottom two rows in about every level I look into now"
Solution: Be More original, add COOL art, not sprites, and have it open to the world. This goes back to my first solution, make cool art that you can play on, they will be more open, no boxes. (NO DON'T MAKE BLACK BOXES, THEY STILL ARE BOX MINIGAMES)

"Your art is shaded terribly"
Solution: See these threads:
http://eeforumify.com/viewtopic.php?id=2305
http://eeforumify.com/viewtopic.php?id=3568

Now you don't have to read through it all, but these can help alot.

"I see mario related stuff"
Solution: This is a practical no-no. If your going to copy mario, do it in an original way, and copy it exactly from the game.

"The PLAYS Sign"
Solution: I'm not saying it's terrible, but it could be smaller and give you more room in your world.

I'm going to play the level now. Then I can give more advice.

EDIT: DONE! After playing the level I thought:

"EWWW Hook jumps there were a ton"
Solution: Make something more original, here, this helps:

http://eeforumify.com/viewtopic.php?id=19
http://eeforumify.com/viewtopic.php?id=6985

"Coin spam..."
Solution: Too many blue coins, take them out. I don't like hearing a ring sound every few seconds. Under 100 would be good.

"repetitive minigames"
Solution: The Air and water levels were alot alike. mix it up a little bit. (Also, hooks are very repetitive)

The map was better than my first, so grats to you. It all comes with practice.

What she said.

#4 Before February 2015

Aoitenshi
Member
Joined: 2015-02-18
Posts: 2,058

Re: Aoitenshi's 'This Map Sucks' Map

New Challenge Map updated.

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#5 Before February 2015

MIHB
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Re: Aoitenshi's 'This Map Sucks' Map

Can somebody explain having a plays sign?   We can SEE the number of plays when we select it in the lobby.

#6 Before February 2015

Aoitenshi
Member
Joined: 2015-02-18
Posts: 2,058

Re: Aoitenshi's 'This Map Sucks' Map

MIHB wrote:

Can somebody explain having a plays sign?   We can SEE the number of plays when we select it in the lobby.

Now that u mention it. It's useless, thanks for "Passive" Help!

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#7 Before February 2015

Aoitenshi
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Joined: 2015-02-18
Posts: 2,058

Re: Aoitenshi's 'This Map Sucks' Map

New Map updated.

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