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Well its finnaly here after weeks of building tmx excape the base has been finished.
To play the world go to either:
beta- http://beta.everybodyedits.com/games/PWAOBDjEaMa0I
nonbeta- http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWAOBDjEaMa0I
enjoy
(the world is 100% tested garentee)
The art is good, but the minigames could use work. And oh crap, ^ arrow jumps are really bad.
well at least you like the art (i made it)
The art is good
The art was really good, but as D-rock said the minigames could be improved, but I enjoyed playing it atleast^^
The art was meh. It certainly wasn't bad, but it could've been better. But of course, you'll become better and better at making art the more you make, so quality will come with experience. As for the minis, well, they were terrible. Most of them just consisted of jumping from block to block, and I even saw a hook jump. I quit eventually, not because the level was too hard, but just because the minis were so boring, not to mention they were all box minis. I suggest you find a better mini maker for your crew.
How is this considered a mini?
Art: 8/10
Minis: 1/10
I'm not trying to be mean. I'm just offering my feedback.
Last edited by Supadorf24 (May 21 2011 3:28:31 pm)
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no offense, but as far as i decided to go, i wasn't even in the base, so there was no need to escape it. I would suggest a more fitting title.
i thought the minis were good and some were quite challenging.
I quit here.
The art remembered me of the dino of good egg galaxy
I liked the art but the mini's don't interact at all with the art, which is a shame.
There were good concepts in the mini's but some were just, just jumping.
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I finished it, but if I weren't in the mood to deal with them I'd have quit where EJD did. Highjumps are by far my least favorite of the cheezy minis people use.
is it me or is this the only world on this forum in wich people pick on the minis? I mean yeah the minis arent the BEST but theres a lot of worlds posted in this forum wich have lot worse.
I like the art, the minis was ok, but easy. As were EDJ quitted... make some other minis there, alot of ppl ragequit and hate that kind of minis.
Otherwise I like it
art is good
minis arent, try make slight chanches using gravity and making stuff higher
Lol first I want to say that I wasn't stumped at that string of minis, I was writing some of my review.
Well, I guess it was okay. But the minis were very easy, there were several hookjumps, a load of tightfits, at least one that was the two combined, and the minis were mostly in black. That's not really a problem when it' a single person who made them, but for a crew, you should really try to blend the minis into the art, which, by the way, was above-noobly. But that doesn't say much...
Oh, and where is the eighth coin?! I finished, but only have 7/8 coins.
lol, i added it on that mini i changed, u know.
I go in and see the first mini I bordom-quit the art was meh, not that great.
I won. Try not to use hookjumps and the ^ arrows on the ground, you know nobody likes those.
Last edited by Shy Guy (May 22 2011 1:00:33 pm)
The art is nice, but the minis not really.
also there is the sixth coin or so that you cannot reach.
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The art is good, but some of the minigames are unoriginal. Overall, I think it's a good level.
is it me or is this the only world on this forum in wich people pick on the minis? I mean yeah the minis arent the BEST but theres a lot of worlds posted in this forum wich have lot worse.
Really? These minis are pretty bad. Give me a link to a level that has worse. Either that or just be happy people are willing to take the time to give you their advice.
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at least there aren't any hook jumps....oh wait..
way to much space, for the minis that u used, aside that- easy peasy, and average art.
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k, so quite a few people have said the art's not brilliant but not one of them have said how i can improve it, so how can i?
Work on improving the minis before you work on the art.
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k but i still wanna know what i can do to improve the art.
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