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D-rock2308

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MG Journey To Atlantis (Deepsea Adventure REMAKE)

Hey everyone! We, MG crew, (and nou, since he was in mg back in the day) decided to remake one of our old unsaved maps, Deepsea Adventure, that was made a year ago. Now with updated minigames, art, and name, we bring you Journey to Atlantis, which is a fun easy map with a great scenic adventure. Hope you enjoy your stay at Atlantis!

Here was the progress:
OLD:                                                                              NEW:                                            NEWER:                                                   NEWEST:

http://beta.everybodyedits.com/games/PWzG_vGSpba0I

http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWzG_vGSpba0I

Enjoy!

Hurricane

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Re: MG Journey To Atlantis (Deepsea Adventure REMAKE)

Done, 9.yocto.pico.centi.nano/10

D-rock2308

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Re: MG Journey To Atlantis (Deepsea Adventure REMAKE)

And our first winner of our new map, ERUZA! congrats.

(Yes supadorf, I saw you ragequit! :O)

Last edited by D-rock2308 (May 15 2011 8:56:35 pm)

supadorf24

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Re: MG Journey To Atlantis (Deepsea Adventure REMAKE)

Ragequit? I did no such thing. In truth, I was told to go to bed. Lol. Very fun level. And I figured you'd post something about me here.

The minis were excellent, as was the art. When I went to Seaworld, I'm pretty sure the ride I went on was called Journey to Atlantis, so, um, congrats for that.

EDIT: Typing on an iPod is a pain. 1xd1

Last edited by Supadorf24 (May 15 2011 9:04:53 pm)

D-rock2308

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Re: MG Journey To Atlantis (Deepsea Adventure REMAKE)

Ikr? Thanks for the feedback. Since this went well, I may remake tomb raider

supadorf24

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Re: MG Journey To Atlantis (Deepsea Adventure REMAKE)

Do Dig Dug instead. Wait . . . a Dig Dug level would be . . . amazing! What a great idea! *pats himself on the back*

Kaosslasher

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Re: MG Journey To Atlantis (Deepsea Adventure REMAKE)

its a fun level, but blue coins will make you rage. there just plain cheap. most thing about the level i got all the coin exept the on to the bottom right, i recommend erasing that one.

that, and there is too many jump from arrow and aim minis.

and the art is ok, but the wave is to bright, the bridge from the right is going in front of the wave, lines in art, the fire from lighting just... dosint fit in you know? the ship on wave looks wierd with the cannon thing, and the blue on top of level needs more color, or needs to be erased.

These are my opinions / critics.

mini games:   7/10
art: 5/10
overall: 6/10

D-rock2308

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Re: MG Journey To Atlantis (Deepsea Adventure REMAKE)

its a fun level, but blue coins will make you rage. there just plain cheap. most thing about the level i got all the coin exept the on to the bottom right, i recommend erasing that one.

that, and there is too many jump from arrow and aim minis.

and the art is ok, but the wave is to bright, the bridge from the right is going in front of the wave, lines in art, the fire from lighting just... dosint fit in you know? the ship on wave looks wierd with the cannon thing, and the blue on top of level needs more color, or needs to be erased.

These are my opinions / critics.

mini games:   7/10
art: 5/10
overall: 6/10

I dont get how you ranked art so low. This isn't biased, but I think this art exceeds mx maps and a ton of others, and its below average? The wave didn't look good dalrker if you look at progress maps. The lightning certainly fits with all the other evil things. And how else you going to make the cannon look good and playable? Also, that bridge is a dock and its behind the wave. Hmmm lines in art are needed and it doesnt look terribad.

To the minis, they were original and easy. Most minigames in house of easter were like that too. Maybe too easy for you.

Did you think Getting to atlantis wouldnt be dangerous?

Kaosslasher

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Re: MG Journey To Atlantis (Deepsea Adventure REMAKE)

To the minis, they were original and easy. Most minigames in house of easter were like that too. Maybe too easy for you.

Yes, they were too easy

and fine, i shouldn't have said all that about art, im not the best artist or anything anyway.

but still fix the dock a little bit, and the 2nd blue coin at bottom right, then i'll be happy

D-rock2308

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Re: MG Journey To Atlantis (Deepsea Adventure REMAKE)

To the minis, they were original and easy. Most minigames in house of easter were like that too. Maybe too easy for you.

Yes, they were too easy

and fine, i shouldn't have said all that about art, im not the best artist or anything anyway.

but still fix the dock a little bit, and the 2nd blue coin at bottom right, then i'll be happy

Done.
And added more yellow coins, more chance for magic.

Shy Guy

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Re: MG Journey To Atlantis (Deepsea Adventure REMAKE)

Added some gills to shark

RhazzleFrazzle

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Re: MG Journey To Atlantis (Deepsea Adventure REMAKE)

fun level to play. i guess mg crew is better than when everyone was only making noobish levels.

Pyromaniac

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Re: MG Journey To Atlantis (Deepsea Adventure REMAKE)

Honestly drock, I don't really like the art either... Maybe a 6/10....? Another thing would be the palm tree, which   honestly looks bad.. IMO. Also. The clouds. Not nearly dark enough for the lightning, and only two... ? And the clownfish. It has no depth or shading.
  Another thing would be The sun... Not enough shading and the rays... Well........

Well. That's my critique, don't eat me ().()

And since I'm in mg, could I fix that stuff?

EDIT: if I'd had more time I wouldve asked to fix the wave, which I agree, is too bright.. And also, while I think the octopus looks cool, it's like in a pretty random spot....

Last edited by Pyromaniac (May 17 2011 4:52:22 am)

Wezza

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Re: MG Journey To Atlantis (Deepsea Adventure REMAKE)

the wave is going the wrong direction o.0

D-rock2308

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Re: MG Journey To Atlantis (Deepsea Adventure REMAKE)

Honestly drock, I don't really like the art either... Maybe a 6/10....? Another thing would be the palm tree, which   honestly looks bad.. IMO. Also. The clouds. Not nearly dark enough for the lightning, and only two... ? And the clownfish. It has no depth or shading.
  Another thing would be The sun... Not enough shading and the rays... Well........

Well. That's my critique, don't eat me ().()

And since I'm in mg, could I fix that stuff?

EDIT: if I'd had more time I wouldve asked to fix the wave, which I agree, is too bright.. And also, while I think the octopus looks cool, it's like in a pretty random spot....

I don't see how this art looks bad at all, and everyone, except people from MX, have said it is bad. (Jealousy?)
The palm tree is really cool.
It's day out, the clouds should be light, and there doesnt have to be 500 clouds in the sky at once. About the lightning, again, getting to atlantis wont be a cakewalk, so expect lightning to fly from nowhere. It makes sense.

Only on clownfish, because would you want to hang around a giant red shark and a kraken? Kay, didnt think so. And yes it has shading. LOOK WIT' YO EYES MAN!
and we arent going to use warning blocks with the sun. It's shaded perfectly fine.

the wave is going the wrong direction o.0

How do you know?

Greenzoid2

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Re: MG Journey To Atlantis (Deepsea Adventure REMAKE)

I don't see why everyone is saying its so bad. Remember it's a re-upload. Without completely changing a lot of things you can't really make it look perfect. And changes like that wouldn't really make it a re-upload any more. It'd be a complete re-design.

D-rock2308

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Re: MG Journey To Atlantis (Deepsea Adventure REMAKE)

I don't see why everyone is saying its so bad. Remember it's a re-upload. Without completely changing a lot of things you can't really make it look perfect. And changes like that wouldn't really make it a re-upload any more. It'd be a complete re-design.

exactly, thank you.

DK Levels

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Re: MG Journey To Atlantis (Deepsea Adventure REMAKE)

Honestly drock, I don't really like the art either... Maybe a 6/10....? Another thing would be the palm tree, which   honestly looks bad.. IMO. Also. The clouds. Not nearly dark enough for the lightning, and only two... ? And the clownfish. It has no depth or shading.
  Another thing would be The sun... Not enough shading and the rays... Well........

Well. That's my critique, don't eat me ().()

And since I'm in mg, could I fix that stuff?

EDIT: if I'd had more time I wouldve asked to fix the wave, which I agree, is too bright.. And also, while I think the octopus looks cool, it's like in a pretty random spot....

I quite liked the palm tree o_o
What the people said above, This is really good art for its time imo, and I like how they only edited certain parts so they still look the same but better.
Good job MG
Ill play it fully tommorow and edit this

Enlightener

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Re: MG Journey To Atlantis (Deepsea Adventure REMAKE)

Fun level, just beat it.
Art was great for a remake imo
Minis were pretty easy and likeable

Codfoshie

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Re: MG Journey To Atlantis (Deepsea Adventure REMAKE)

This brought back memories, the minimap of course, the minis seem different
Relatively ok, but it seems too short, and no real challenges, which dissapointed me

However, the minis were quite fun, and easy when you figure out how it is done.
Plus i got a crappy +1 magic in your map.

Overall rating 7/10

D-rock2308

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Re: MG Journey To Atlantis (Deepsea Adventure REMAKE)

This brought back memories, the minimap of course, the minis seem different
Relatively ok, but it seems too short, and no real challenges, which dissapointed me

However, the minis were quite fun, and easy when you figure out how it is done.
Plus i got a crappy +1 magic in your map.

Overall rating 7/10

Haha, Yeah, I tried to keep the difficulty of the level the same while making it fun.

dol257

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Re: MG Journey To Atlantis (Deepsea Adventure REMAKE)

art is awesome, minis are awesome! you did a very good job!

D-rock2308

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Re: MG Journey To Atlantis (Deepsea Adventure REMAKE)

Reviving this topic, and thanks dol!

Wezza

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Re: MG Journey To Atlantis (Deepsea Adventure REMAKE)

the wave is going the wrong direction o.0

How do you know?

well, waves are always going land in ward. Else there wouldn't have been that big dissaster in Japan and such.

D-rock2308

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Re: MG Journey To Atlantis (Deepsea Adventure REMAKE)

the wave is going the wrong direction o.0

How do you know?

well, waves are always going land in ward. Else there wouldn't have been that big dissaster in Japan and such.

Well the people of EElantia can summon there own waves, kay?