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COOLMAX500

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news

hi im coolmax500,

this is my news world:

as with muffin minis (another of my worlds) this is 75% finished yet 100% possible, ive already had some critisism on this world, but i can take critisism, so critisise
link is:

beta
http://beta.everybodyedits.com/games/PW08ETMF2Qa0I
non beta
http://everybodyedits.com/games/PW08ETMF2Qa0I

Tako

Member

From: Memphis, Tennessee, USA

Joined: 2015-08-10

Posts: 6,663

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Re: news

As far as the art goes, I'd recommend taking out that blue thing on the side, and adding something more news-related in the background. Like a TV or something.

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Yeah, well, you know that's just like, uh, your opinion, man.

COOLMAX500

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Re: news

sorry, i was meaning to add the weather in that column with minis

nlmdejonge

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Joined: 2015-02-15

Posts: 1,264

Re: news

so critisise

I suggest you put a crown where the current end of the room is.
(If I'm not mistaken it's currently above the "TMX" letters?)

Also, these 30 coins in the beginning need to be spread across the room.
If there are still coins to get, players are less likely to quit after that first descent.

The guy's text balloon is blocking the woman's view.
They look like kind folks.

The blue on reddish text in the bottom is somewhat difficult to read...

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I have permanently left the game and forum.
EE is an entertaining game and I enjoyed playing it...
...but it's time for me to move on.

COOLMAX500

Guest

Re: news

thank you i will try to fix these problems as soon as possible