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I know you guys hated my last level, but can you please tell me what you think of this.
Cheers.
Better than the other one, but the minis are pretty boring.
Art is okay, not special, but hey! You can't make pretty 3D graphics with shadings on retro games!
Boring minis
the art was okay, the level was boring, you overused tight fits and plain jumping.
Try to make the level fun.
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^ thats what i say, but if you are new, keep going.
We all once were noobs
I decided that since you tried to be a little more original, I would play it. I still don't like it at all, because the art is average, and the minigames were still unoriginal and just not fun.
There were too many tightfits in your level. Who wants to waste their time fitting perfectly into a space for no reason, when there is enough room for a decent minigame? The first mini is also really just a filler in disguise, it's impossible to fail.
I found a hookjump. NEVER PUT HOOK JUMPS IN YOUR LEVEL. Sorry, I have this thing against hooks. They are unfun and a waste of time.
If you decide to try to make original maps, ask yourself this: Is This MiniGame Fun? If no, delete it, and don't look back. Try something new.
And that is all, I think.
I also found a trollable green key.
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Still unoriginal and boring. There was so much unused space, and the little space you used was filled with unoriginal minis. Try again.
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Well, it was better than the last one. Keep working at it!
Still unoriginal and boring. There was so much unused space, and the little space you used was filled with unoriginal minis. Try again.
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Maybe you should join a crew?
I'll give you a hint about level making: if it takes 1 day to finish, there's a fairly good chance it's not going to be very good.
It's not impossible, no, but I'd be very surprised if someone makes an amazing level in 1 day.
Yeah, well, you know that's just like, uh, your opinion, man.
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Just one big maze. Minis were better but still pretty bad. Art, better but you can do better. Try again. Too many hook jumps and the elevators and low ceiling jumps were overused. All filler and no fun.
And I'm going to keep hating on you until you can make awesome levels because this was a serious improvement and I want to keep seeing huge leaps like that. You made a big improvement but this was a completely nooby level.
c wat i did thar?
"Sometimes failing a leap of faith is better than inching forward"
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Supadorf24 wrote:Still unoriginal and boring. There was so much unused space, and the little space you used was filled with unoriginal minis. Try again.
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Maybe you should join a crew?
I'll give you a hint about level making: if it takes 1 day to finish, there's a fairly good chance it's not going to be very good.
It's not impossible, no, but I'd be very surprised if someone makes an amazing level in 1 day.
RC Team: Human Anatomy was made in a half day (I know the minis are VERY noobish, but we didn't have someone who can do good ones.)
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