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RonaldMcDonald

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My level: Coin Hunt Lands

Hey guys, finally finished my first level: Coin Hunt Lands.
I think the title needs work. Perhaps something like Coin Conquest? Who knows.

http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWURIHj5C9a0I

To be honest, it's disorganized but I'm happy how it turned out overall.

The object is to find all of the coins. It's got no real direction that you're supposed to go in, you just explore the place. It starts off in a factory-themed section, and from there you can go to tunnels, floating islands, stairs, and all the rest of the minigames.

Blue coins are optional.

Things I've improved over the past few days:
*Very few hook jumps.
*Floating islands less frustrating
*Removed a couple keys.

What do you think?

Last edited by RonaldMcDonald (Jun 13 2011 5:51:45 pm)

supadorf24

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Joined: 2015-02-26

Posts: 2,675

Re: My level: Coin Hunt Lands

Well, the minis were kind of boring. They just lacked creativity. But I'm glad that you avoided tight fits and hook jumps, though a few did slip in. I also appreciated the non-linear style. Try and make your minis a little more fun next time. Add some more pizazz.