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Death Bridge By Sk8erboi108

I made a new world Called Death Bridge.

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Post a comment below Rating my level 1-10/10.

I'm hoping to get at least   2,000 plays....but....um.... 1xp1

Tell me your favorite part and how I can improve

Every 10 +reps I will make a new world!

EDIT: Improved metiors,
Added stars,
made REAL minis.

Last edited by Sk8erboi108 (Jun 30 2011 8:23:18 am)

Oturan

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Re: Death Bridge By Sk8erboi108

Ratings:
Art:6-10
The art was quite good, but it can be improved, such as those vines or what it is? It looked a bit like the cliffs were electrified. So you should do some shading on them.
And there was a lot of empty space, where you could add things to make it look better. The bridge looked good, but I think you should make it in a larger scale. and you might increase the sight of whatever destroys the bridge.

Minis:1-10
There were barely any minis, and the minis that were there didn't pose a challenge at all. You used the same minis more than once, which isn't very fun, since it's just boring to do the same things again. And the way up for that rubble, was just pure annoying, since the slightest misstake would have you repeat it from the beginning, and the arrows on some of the falling debris made it even more annoying. You could also have made more, since there were a lot of unused space in the map. And they were just plain boring!!

Oh right forgot to give it an overall rating too, 4-10, the minis really dragged you down

Last edited by Oturan (Jun 28 2011 3:56:33 pm)

Nou

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Joined: 2015-02-24

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Re: Death Bridge By Sk8erboi108

I'm giving it a 4/10. The art was decent but it played very bad. The keys are spammable, making it impossible for the people down to get up, if you fall once you need to restart everything. I skipped half the level because of an exploit. When you get up in the portal and you fall, there's no use in going the top way while it seems there is.

You need to work hard my friend!

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Aoitenshi

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Joined: 2015-02-18

Posts: 2,058

Re: Death Bridge By Sk8erboi108

Art is decent, the best part of the art is the meteor and the bridge.

For gameplay, Yes they use original concept, but i wont say the minis are overused, the concept itself is already overused.

Stands for 5/10

Last edited by Aoitenshi (Jun 29 2011 4:16:43 am)

MiniSwede

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Re: Death Bridge By Sk8erboi108

Uhm is this lvl done?-.-

Breadfinn

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Joined: 2015-02-15

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Re: Death Bridge By Sk8erboi108

Am I the only one who reminds me of my own level?
http://i581.photobucket.com/albums/ss25 … 337/fb.jpg

Edit: I played the level and I agree with everyone else. It's pretty bad. Some minis just being repeated and the art is k, but not the best.
4/10

Last edited by Breadfinn (Jun 29 2011 6:26:13 am)

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Gamer1120

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Joined: 2015-12-29

Posts: 2,659

Re: Death Bridge By Sk8erboi108

6/10 for the part that is done, the art is fine, but it can be improved, and the minis are nice but repetitive.