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Blackboy1323

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HQ Crew A Day at the Beach

As title says, It's A Day at the Beach made by the HQ Crew! For short, it's HQ Crew Beach Day.

Here is the link: http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWixUYGFdca0I

Note for HQ Crew members: If you see a user named "Pancake", just to let you know, it is me, except I have chat on that account.

Plays so far: 1,522

I've been hoping to get to 2,000 plays though...Ehh...Oh well. 1xp1

On a scale of 1-10, what would you rate this level?

Would you Like or Dislike this level?

Answer in your post below! 1bigsmile1

Sk8erboi108

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Re: HQ Crew A Day at the Beach

how do you get those ee similes?

Cyclopsicle

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Re: HQ Crew A Day at the Beach

Constructive Criticism/Rant:
The Bad Stuff
Light from the Lighthouse
The Lighthouse
The Boat
The Dock
The Sand which doesn't look like sand at all
The Umbrella
Why is there a single cloud? If your only gonna make one, don't make one at all.
The Trees
The Water
The Sun
Poor minigame design (Ex. the one where if you fell you restart 1-4 minigames depending on how far you went)

Gosh, that's alot I rate 1 out of 10

BTW this is all imo

Last edited by Cyclopsicle (Jun 26 2011 11:59:24 am)

Blackboy1323

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Re: HQ Crew A Day at the Beach

First of all, we made this level based off from Procsesor's Beach pic.

Second of all, the Dock and the Boat look fine to me.

Third of all, that's the best we can make the sand...

Fourth of all, It doesnt matter if the minigames are bad.

Fifth of all, that's the best we could make the Sun and water.

Sixth of all, the umbrella is super freaking huge, after all. o.O

Seventh of all, your post sounds like your saying that all our levels are bad....Even if this is our first crew level...

I just dont like my levels critized...I like them the way they are. Other EE players possibly like them too.

Last edited by Blackboy1323 (Jun 26 2011 12:12:55 pm)

Sk8erboi108

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Re: HQ Crew A Day at the Beach

Yea! U Tell 'em blackboy1323!!!!!!

Cyclopsicle

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Re: HQ Crew A Day at the Beach

BTW this is all imo

imo In My Opinion

Kirby

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Joined: 2015-04-04

Posts: 4,311

Re: HQ Crew A Day at the Beach

i rate it a 4.5/10
i beat it in only 30 seconds and half of the map was plain, open. you could run right through it, no challenge.

D-rock2308

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Re: HQ Crew A Day at the Beach

should be called hold right and space, because that's practically all I did. Someof the art was okay, but some of it was bad. 4/10

Slovenia

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Re: HQ Crew A Day at the Beach

Pretty good. 6/10

Garfield2436

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Re: HQ Crew A Day at the Beach

First of all, I suggest you make it longer. I won within 1 minute, what kind of map is that suppose to be?? Yes, that means including more minis and stuff, and please try NOT to include box minis. Box minis are lame. TRY attaching some minis for example, attach some minis to artwork and cover up crowns with black blocks.
Second, couldn't you add some nice lumps of sand? The sand looks plain, and running through it is no challenge for anybody.
Third, you are meaning to try to keep a boss area to keep people entertained? I don't get it. :/ There's a WIN area and a boss area...
Most of the art was bad, some of it was okay. Some minis were good, but there are some minis are low ceiling jumps and I did not like that.
Why would you put a ship and a dock there when there are NO minis to play there? Can't you put some gaps between it? Combine some coin doors to make it still look like sand? I mean, come on, add some more stuff, it looks seriously plain nothing.
My rating for this level: 3/10
Do not -rep this post, because there is no reason for that. Most of us are putting opinions into people's worlds.

Last edited by Garfield2436 (Jun 26 2011 3:58:59 pm)

Codfoshie

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Joined: 2015-02-15

Posts: 686

Re: HQ Crew A Day at the Beach

Meh... Rating: 3/10

supadorf24

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Joined: 2015-02-26

Posts: 2,675

Re: HQ Crew A Day at the Beach

I'd give it about a 3. The art was somewhat engaging but the minis were, well, I didn't really see any minis. I was mostly just holding right and space like D-rock said.

Also, I have to address some things you said.

It doesnt matter if the minigames are bad.

Really? I've alway thought levels should be fun, but I guess that's just me.

I just dont like my levels critized...I like them the way they are.

So we're not allowed to criticize this level? All we're supposed to do on this topic is say how much we love this level? Criticism helps someone become better. If you don't accept criticism you'll never improve. You should be glad to receive criticism. I enjoy gettin criticism more than praise, because when someone criticizes something I've made, I know how to improve. Just be a little more open to suggestions and constructive feedback.

Greenzoid2

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Re: HQ Crew A Day at the Beach

You asked if I disliked it or liked it in the main post.

I dislike it, because you made a black box mini section at the very beginning, which is bad within itself, and then you can literally hold jump and right and beat all of them. No challenge at all. It was not fun, especially that giant bit of sand which has no minigames on it.

It looks like you didnt even try to test your minigames, you just made them and said, " oh its possible, next". They are all exploitable, and you did nothing to stop people from falling back any minis at all.

I wont say much about the art, because I am very bad at it, but I will just say that there is not enough detail anywhere.

Overall, everything needs work, be a bit more original, and spend more time making things perfect.

3/10

procsesor

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Re: HQ Crew A Day at the Beach

Hey, Give us some slack, its our first map ok? Geez... :/

Blackboy1323

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Re: HQ Crew A Day at the Beach

Yeah seriously, it's just our first crew map. Dont gotta hate it or anything...

But you guys are just critizing the level too much.....

supadorf24

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Joined: 2015-02-26

Posts: 2,675

Re: HQ Crew A Day at the Beach

I swear to God, you didn't even read my last post, so I'll repost the important bit, although I still recommend you read my last post.

Criticism helps someone become better. If you don't accept criticism you'll never improve. You should be glad to receive criticism. I enjoy gettin criticism more than praise, because when someone criticizes something I've made, I know how to improve. Just be a little more open to suggestions and constructive feedback.

Shy Guy

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Re: HQ Crew A Day at the Beach

The art's not bad. It looks decent for a first map.

Sk8erboi108

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Re: HQ Crew A Day at the Beach

thank you!

D-rock2308

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Re: HQ Crew A Day at the Beach

Hey, Give us some slack, its our first map ok? Geez... :/

Even if it is your first map it will still get judged, just preparing for the future, eh?

MRBOOGAWESOME

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Re: HQ Crew A Day at the Beach

Meh the minis were pretty bad.. and i got trapped.

progirl

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Re: HQ Crew A Day at the Beach

ehh its ok, except you cant get to the boat.

katz

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Re: HQ Crew A Day at the Beach

overall rating:4/10. it was ok.   :/     for a first map pretty good.

Last edited by katz (Jul 4 2011 2:55:30 pm)

Kaosslasher

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Re: HQ Crew A Day at the Beach

Its a good first map ( but i think you should get rid of the boss