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Muftwin

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Mirage

-Can you survive the tricks of the desert? You will not reach the end.-

http://beta.everybodyedits.com/games/PWAETLJtOla0I
http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWAETLJtOla0I

So yeah, this is my newest level, made it all by myself. Minis are illusions.

Codfoshie

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Joined: 2015-02-15

Posts: 686

Re: Mirage

Ragequit on 1st mini. Not a good start to a map...

MIHB

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Re: Mirage

Ragequit on 1st mini. Not a good start to a map...

It appears you got suckered, as I am playing through right now, and both of the first two are very easy.

Wezza

Guest

Re: Mirage

You did some awesome shading in that piramide there o.0

MIHB

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Re: Mirage

Upon further review, the map becomes basically unplayable after the first two rooms.   The area on top of the first hill is incredibly annoying, and I quit as soon as I figured it out and got through, as I had no wish to continue.   Maybe it becomes better after that again, but that particular section is an absolute disaster.

Last edited by MIHB (Jun 19 2011 1:57:26 am)

EDJ

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Joined: 2015-08-20

Posts: 2,157

Re: Mirage

Forgot to read the part about illusions, so the first two mini's I felt like I exploited it.
Cactus and the part where MIHB quit bit were annoying and I when i arrived at the end I came one coin short
Most of the illusions were better than ex's illusion   imo, especially the portal
Well done.

Muftwin

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Re: Mirage

Forgot to read the part about illusions, so the first two mini's I felt like I exploited it.
Cactus and the part where MIHB quit bit were annoying and I when i arrived at the end I came one coin short
Most of the illusions were better than ex's illusion   imo, especially the portal
Well done.
http://i.imgur.com/FlhWM.png

did you go inside the tumble weed...?

glad you guys like it

Kaosslasher

Guest

Re: Mirage

Well since forums are back: Indeed like everyone said, its a good map. but the ?3rd? mini is annoying.

dasuper11

Guest

Re: Mirage

I couldn't figure out 2nd

Pyromaniac

Official Caroler

Joined: 2015-02-15

Posts: 4,868

Re: Mirage

I dont' know about the minis, only made it to the second one, then couldn't figure out what to do.

So i'll review the art.

The sand: No shading.. Looks like plain orange.. well IS plain orange for that matter. Not aesthetically pleasing.
The pyramid: Again, lack of shading makes this look boring and plain.
Actually instead of listing everything in the level ima just say that this whole level just needs more shading imo. Also, the tree isn't "full" enuff, needs more leaves?

Muftwin

Guest

Re: Mirage

dude this is my best art ever...im not an artist

tho i could use some more specific pointers, i dont really even know what shading is.
EDIT: -Updated mingame 3-
should be less annoying now and more illusiony

nlmdejonge

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Joined: 2015-02-15

Posts: 1,264

Re: Mirage

EDIT: -Updated mingame 3-
should be less annoying now and more illusiony

Still annoying, sorry.
It's too much in the air, if you make one mistake you have to replay the rest for no real reason.
(I call these minigames "air cities" ).

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I have permanently left the game and forum.
EE is an entertaining game and I enjoyed playing it...
...but it's time for me to move on.

Muftwin

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Re: Mirage

EDIT: -Updated mingame 3-
should be less annoying now and more illusiony

Still annoying, sorry.
It's too much in the air, if you make one mistake you have to replay the rest for no real reason.
(I call these minigames "air cities" ).

?? really dont see what your saying

katz

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Re: Mirage

Sounds fun i will play.

Kirby

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Joined: 2015-04-04

Posts: 4,311

Re: Mirage

no. extremely annoying. i raged where mihb raged

EEguy

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Re: Mirage

I could only beat the 2nd, after that I didn't know what to do.
Art: Needs more shading. It was too plain.

Greenzoid2

Guest

Re: Mirage

I got stuck on the second mini, and based on the reviews of the third one, I have no wish to play again and try to get further :/

I liked the first one though

Muftwin

Guest

Re: Mirage

green i updated the 3rd one....
eeguy im not a very good artist still im planning on updating it later

-mirage is done...but not finished. that is a true mirage- (-.- ???)

Thy Cowman

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Re: Mirage

Win. It's a bit hard but it really isn't that bad. Liked the illusions.

Last edited by Thy Cowman (Jul 7 2011 7:27:02 pm)

Codfoshie

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Joined: 2015-02-15

Posts: 686

Re: Mirage

I won, disregard my first post, i am a nub after all.

evidence: