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EverybodyEditsBetaKid

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Frozen Race

Its a Frozen Race Track I have made collect all the coins to win , 100% tested and works perfectly , Have fun

Beta: http://beta.everybodyedits.com/games/PWgAS21hd2a0I
Non-Beta: http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWgAS21hd2a0I

Brandon_Alezz

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Re: Frozen Race

oh sorry for this it was uncalled for

Last edited by Brandon_Alezz (Aug 6 2011 5:43:23 pm)

Shift

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Re: Frozen Race

^ That's one way of getting people to hate you.

The level's not a race, like the title says, and look very sloppy, but still. This IS the correct spot for this post to get feedback-- preferably positive feedback.

Chewy

Banned

Re: Frozen Race

Delete this post it is unneeded   and the level is slow :O

Don't flame people's stuff.

eg1

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Re: Frozen Race

Delete this post it is unneeded   and the level is slow :O

2. No flaming

And therefore that's a rule you should follow. Besides, at least the level isn't one of those terrible, trolled levels I see often, it was actually a pretty good level, and he put it in the right place.

EverybodyEditsBetaKid

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Re: Frozen Race

hahaha thanks eg1 your really nice, and Brandon_Alezz please keep your opinion to yourself unless it is something nice to say about it.

eg1

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Re: Frozen Race

No problem.

EverybodyEditsBetaKid

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Re: Frozen Race

Pike270

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Re: Frozen Race

Hello EverybodyEditsBetaKid nice concept. Some things I'd work on are a larger scale, more interesting kinds of obstacles. Your level is automatically better than all those other world that abuse the use of the same old boring minigames. Good luck at working towards improving your levels.

Two things though:
1. The bunch of coins at the beginning seems pointless and I'd rather have more coins in the track.
2. Are you supposed to be able to just sit here?

Last edited by Pike270 (Apr 24 2011 12:10:10 am)

Brandon_Alezz

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Re: Frozen Race

Delete this post it is unneeded   and the level is slow :O

Don't flame people's stuff.

hahaha thanks eg1 your really nice, and Brandon_Alezz please keep your opinion to yourself unless it is something nice to say about it.

i fixed chewy and im sorry i shouldn't have said that

Last edited by Brandon_Alezz (Aug 6 2011 5:46:31 pm)

jakery

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Re: Frozen Race

Please don't write a post with just smileys; it's "smiley spam". Thanks.

plat aka kingpooultra

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Joined: 2017-05-27

Posts: 3,873

Re: Frozen Race

the world needs alot of work, but I see you are new so you will get better, but try to shade the track so it looks like ice if you know what I mean