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Jeremiah

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THE FINAL LEVEL!!!!!!

Come to my last final ultimite level. I hope everyone likes it! I tried my hardest to put alot of effort into makeing this level!

I spent a good 2 hours on this level! I made a good level for a medium sized world! I hope you enjoy the level!

Im trying to be nice to. And Also Please comment on this fourm and tell me what you thought of the level! I really liked it! It's okay if you dont like my level! Just remember im 10 years old.

Level Name: Uderground Adventure (not enough room for the letter u.)

Link:     http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWVKQXOqH7a0I

Nou

Member

Joined: 2015-02-24

Posts: 2,762

Re: THE FINAL LEVEL!!!!!!

It's a major improvement over your coasters/hookjumps garbage. A LOT better. However, it is just dull, a bit on the boring side. The looks are very standard and the challenges...well...there are none. It's just collecting coins.

So based on your other levels it's much better, but keep improving!
Also, 2 hours on a level isn't as long as you'd link. We spend like a month on one map with 5 peope sometimes...

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No u.

Jeremiah

Guest

Re: THE FINAL LEVEL!!!!!!

Thank You Nou! I tried Hard to make it good!

Oturan

Guest

Re: THE FINAL LEVEL!!!!!!

It's better than the other ones, that all I can say. Keep improving

Baticon

Guest

Re: THE FINAL LEVEL!!!!!!

-Improved your minis. Check.
-Controlled your anger. Check.
-Used background right. Check!

Keep improving like the others said.

Aedan

Guest

Re: THE FINAL LEVEL!!!!!!

-twitches in horror when sees the lvl- please make an actual world with minis and the such still better than the others

Aoitenshi

Member

Joined: 2015-02-18

Posts: 2,058

Re: THE FINAL LEVEL!!!!!!

Thats one huge improvements, although not so great! You get your rep back.

dol257

Guest

Re: THE FINAL LEVEL!!!!!!

great, you are really improving!

Garfield2436

Guest

Re: THE FINAL LEVEL!!!!!!

Even though this world is still dull and not really fun, you are really improving, Jeremiah. Keep up the good work with your later levels, and you will be a great world creator in no time.
You have shown lots of improvement unlike your other levels Jeremiah.

plat aka kingpooultra

Member

Joined: 2017-05-27

Posts: 3,873

Re: THE FINAL LEVEL!!!!!!

Way better, I enjoyed your level, adventures are awesome. I give you your rep back, you really improved

theredtigers

Guest

Re: THE FINAL LEVEL!!!!!!

nice improvement !!!
if you keep on detting better you will pwn nou ( or not ) +REP!

Last edited by theredtigers (Sep 25 2011 8:17:21 am)