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Palkia6000

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Temple Of Glory

Temple Of Glory is my newest world. Took a fairly long time to make, and I consider it a great deal better than my last world. Tell me what you think of it, and tell me if you find any major exploits.
Thanks.

Beta: beta.http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWADT4aiOGa0I
Non-Beta: http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWADT4aiOGa0I

+Rep if you beat the level.
Extra +Rep if you beat the level with all the blue coins.

Last edited by Palkia6000 (Sep 28 2011 1:03:53 pm)

theredtigers

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Re: Temple Of Glory

plz make beta link !
i will try later need to go to bed
just checking yh the tree art could be beter and at the bottom of the lvl is nothing
but for the reset i like it
and the minis are a bit easy

Last edited by theredtigers (Sep 28 2011 12:52:22 pm)

Palkia6000

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Re: Temple Of Glory

K, thanks for the feedback.

nlmdejonge

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Re: Temple Of Glory

The minis are okay, but it's not clear enough where to go. I decided to quit when I ran into a closed coin door for a second time because I went into another direction than you (apparently) expected the player to go, and it would've been quite a trip back... Probably use more coin doors to fix this problem, or maybe add arrows in the background.

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Palkia6000

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Re: Temple Of Glory

The minis are okay, but it's not clear enough where to go. I decided to quit when I ran into a closed coin door for a second time because I went into another direction than you (apparently) expected the player to go, and it would've been quite a trip back... Probably use more coin doors to fix this problem, or maybe add arrows in the background.

Ok, thanks for the advice, I'll make it clearer next time. In fact, I might start adding some arrows now.

Shift

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Re: Temple Of Glory

My review:

ART: Well, you made a clear effort, I'll give you that. However, the trees are tiny, the earth shouldn't be red, and nothing in the sky is shaded. Well, the castle kind of is... but not really. And what's with the random truck? I don't care if that's your special insignia, a truck does not belong in this level.
I'll give it 4/10

MINIS: Most of the minis are extremely easy, but, however, there were a few challenging ones. They would have been fine if I didn't have to back track so often.
I'll give it 4/10 again.

Kankurou

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Joined: 2016-03-30

Posts: 172

Re: Temple Of Glory

I missed few coins and I coudn't go back, but wow, good job - nice lvl .

nlmdejonge

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Re: Temple Of Glory

Palkia6000, after coin 40 there's nowhere to go, because a portal keeps sending the player back.
This (mirror) portal sends the player back here (mirror), and from there the player can only go back to that other portal.

[Edit: By the way, as you can see in the images (see the smiley I picked and the one I am) I'm now a ghost in that room.]

Last edited by nlmdejonge (Sep 29 2011 1:14:33 pm)

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plat aka kingpooultra

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Re: Temple Of Glory

Ill give the art: 5/10, you tried, I can tell, just needs more work.

Ill give the Minis: 4/10, they seem kinda easy, but there is some somewhat challenging minis.

Palkia6000

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Re: Temple Of Glory

Palkia6000, after coin 40 there's nowhere to go, because a portal keeps sending the player back.
This (mirror) portal sends the player back here (mirror), and from there the player can only go back to that other portal.

[Edit: By the way, as you can see in the images (see the smiley I picked and the one I am) I'm now a ghost in that room.]

It's supposed to do that. After the you go back, you're supposed to go to the entrance of the temple, and the coin doors should no longer be there (if they are/were, tell me please). But I guess I made it a little too confusing, eh?

nlmdejonge

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Joined: 2015-02-15

Posts: 1,264

Re: Temple Of Glory

After the you go back, you're supposed to go to the entrance of the temple, [...]

It's impossible to go back.
Check the images, on the left side there is portal that sends the player to the right side.
And on the right side, it's impossible to go further to the right, the player can only go down, back the the portal that sends the player to the right side.

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I have permanently left the game and forum.
EE is an entertaining game and I enjoyed playing it...
...but it's time for me to move on.

Palkia6000

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Re: Temple Of Glory

>.>

Ok, I'll change that as soon as possible. Thanks for telling me.