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plat aka kingpooultra

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Island In The Sky

I launched the level! Its an adventure level, the difficulty is easy-medium, and its fun!

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I hope you enjoy it!

DylanDaSkater

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Re: Island In The Sky

Sounds fun, will try it out tomorrow

EENinja

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Re: Island In The Sky

Nice world King

I thought the art was much better than the minis, I got 25 gold and 25 blue.

plat aka kingpooultra

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Re: Island In The Sky

nice, thanks, I was trying to give you guys something to do in my level

nlmdejonge

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Re: Island In The Sky

Just played it (win pics): art is okay; coin near the red X) is a bit too annoying (because of the chasm).

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Re: Island In The Sky

I left at my first sight of a hookjump.

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plat aka kingpooultra

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Re: Island In The Sky

I left at my first sight of a hookjump.

That's sad, very sad. There is only 1 hookjump if you do the minis right. As long as there isn't a bunch of hooks its alright *cough*Nub*cough*

Oturan

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Re: Island In The Sky

So you released it Well as said before, the art is better than the minis^^

plat aka kingpooultra

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Re: Island In The Sky

Lol thanks guys!

Pyromaniac

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Re: Island In The Sky

I'm bad with minis, so i'll critique the art.

First lemme say, I'd give it a 6/10. It wasn't bad, I get what you were going for with this.

The sky: If you look at a horizon-
-The sky doesn't stop a quarter of the way up from the ground, does it? Thats the major thing you should fix in your level.

The clouds: Why are they all in a line? They should be spread out.

The island itself: I believe somebody else said this already. I get what you were going for with the stalagmite things, but they are too dis-connected from the island. Also, they should be more solid and less undistinguished. Basically what i'm saying is either go for it all the way, or take them out. Give them more form.

The second island: Why doesn't it have any stalagmites?

Waterfall: Meh. It stops halfway down..? Should look like-

The texture of the island: A bit weird.. Idk its good, just not my style ^^

Theres my two cents.. Don't take this the wrong way. Just trying to help ^^

Last edited by Pyromaniac (Oct 2 2011 7:11:24 pm)

plat aka kingpooultra

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Re: Island In The Sky

Yeah thanks, although wtf is stalagmite lol.

Pyromaniac

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Re: Island In The Sky

Basically what you did under the floating island (brown things hanging off)

Meh i'm bad at explaining sorry D:

plat aka kingpooultra

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Re: Island In The Sky

Those were supposed to be dis-connected from the island, its supposed to make it look like its coming out of the ground.

Pyromaniac

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Re: Island In The Sky

Ohhh ok my bad

plat aka kingpooultra

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Re: Island In The Sky

Lol its okay , plus this map is actually kinda old.