Do you think I could just leave this part blank and it'd be okay? We're just going to replace the whole thing with a header image anyway, right?
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basicly its an art level that is of a laboratory
i just need some feedback on how to improve the art/minis
link is here:
beta: http://beta.everybodyedits.com/games/PWkyHo54YJbEI
nonbeta: http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWkyHo54YJbEI
The art's pretty good, but the minigames show no sign of effort. They're just hookjumps, tight fits, and mindless filler. Be original with your minigames and they will be much more popular.
alright i just kinda wanted to get those over with anyways
ill start changing it soon
The art's ok, but the minis could be so much better. They were boring, and just the normal, average puzzles you find every day. Try and think of new minis that you haven't seen in any levels before.
curently changing the minis
i was working on it last night but it didnt save!:mad: ugh oh well i guess
EDIT: finished minis just need another portal to send you back to the start
ill have it by tommorow :3
EDIT: EDIT: finished testing
Last edited by drew12345 (Oct 11 2011 5:10:29 pm)
clicked off - as soon as i saw hooks.
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I just finished it (win pics) and noticed the room still contains lots of hook jumps...
The minimap is okay. There aren't a lot of minis, even less coins.
It's a bit weird that you didn't add more than 1 coin in the room, and that the one you did add is at the start of the level.
I have permanently left the game and forum.
EE is an entertaining game and I enjoyed playing it...
...but it's time for me to move on.
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To much hooks and boring stuff for me, sorry.
But verry good art!
@nlmdejonge: i only had one coin that was easy to get because of the coin doors in the second beaker, if you didnt get it then you would be stuck, so i made it so you couldnt avoid getting it.
EDIT: removed all (almost) hook jumps for those who are ticked offf by them
added 3 blue coins plus rep to anyone who can get them all
Last edited by drew12345 (Oct 12 2011 6:18:24 pm)
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