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Tornkik

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My First Level

Check it out, tell me what I need to Improve on. Thanks

http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWeF-I0V0TbEI
( There is different routes to take, all will eventually take you to the end, which is right after you get the crown/coins. If you finish it one way, go back and try to find the other. )
CC Please!

EDIT: There might be a few spots that are "wrong" or I missed something, let me know if you find any. I'm still pretty new at this.

Last edited by Tornkik (Oct 19 2011 4:22:41 pm)

ani

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Joined: 2015-02-17

Posts: 649

Re: My First Level

Wow, are you sure this is your first level?

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noelzkie

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Re: My First Level

Yes for being a newbie your pretty good. Keep on going! I'm sure you'll be one of the best world makers on EE. God bless you.

DylanDaSkater

Guest

Re: My First Level

but theres stuff you gotta go over and check again

xXExpress0Xx

Guest

Re: My First Level

Wow that is one awesome first level. The minis could do some improvement though.

Ralaina

Guest

Re: My First Level

Well, that lazer thingy, when it goes around to the backside of that other thingy, make it a bit darker. well that's all I have to say. Not very good explained since I dont feel like it but well

Koya

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From: The island with those Brits

Joined: 2015-02-18

Posts: 6,310

Re: My First Level

First Timer: ... Way Better Than Other Begginers! Keep It Up.

+Rep

Last edited by SquadFS (Oct 20 2011 9:38:44 am)

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Pugmatt

Guest

Re: My First Level

Woa that's an awesome first level O_O
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Tornkik

Guest

Re: My First Level

Thanks for all the feedback!
I'm going to save up energy for a larger map, maybe some new blocks, and then I will get to working on another world.