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Drew12345

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GN Crew: Trick or Treat

this is my crew's halloween contest level

please let me know how it is
(im not quite done with everything just fyi)

beta:http://beta.everybodyedits.com/games/PWdRf2j5mRa0I
nonbeta:http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWdRf2j5mRa0I

Last edited by drew12345 (Oct 23 2011 5:13:54 pm)

Breadfinn

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Joined: 2015-02-15

Posts: 2,063

Re: GN Crew: Trick or Treat

I did not liker being followed around by the owner. It really annoys me.
The art isn't bad
The minigames are not the best, most box minis, but I recommend you to not use secret bricks.
So I'll give it a 6

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Drew12345

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Re: GN Crew: Trick or Treat

k thanks

EENinja

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Re: GN Crew: Trick or Treat

I had a quick go at it

Individually the art was really quite good. I didn't really think it went well together though.

The minis need some more work, as Addi already suggested don't use secret blocks.

All together I thought the level was better than average. I'd give it 6-7 star.

wallacenew

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Re: GN Crew: Trick or Treat

A question to ask: Is the lvl finish?? Or i got the way wrong :rolleyes: ??

Marking Scheme by myself
CI part: 12.5/20
Theme: 10/15 the scary thing is octopus, not ghosts, a good try. But overall feeling doesnt really like halloween, except for the title, 2 people (vampire maybe) and the octopus. The environment doesnt really fit in the theme.
Organization: 2.5/5 the way is a bit not clear

Pl part: 26.5/40
Minis vari.: 10.5/15 not really special, but with some challenge at the end, quite good
Difficulty vari.: 7.5/10 the end-challenge gives u 1 more mark
Coop. with art: 2/5 sorry, but a bit look like black-blocks minis
Phy. effect: 6.5/10 not really fun in physics, except the highjump from the letter 'A' followed by H

Art part: 13/20
get marks mainly on the 2 people. But i suggest u to do something better especially at the tree after the people. Also, the moon and house can have more colour mix to look better.

IA part (Impression & Annoyingness): 16.5/20
Checkpt.: 5/6 not really a problem
Limits Evaluation: 7/9 a bit annoyed at 1st and last, just my feeling
Ease of looking: 4.5/5 decorations mostly doesnt affect looking

Total: 68.5/100 Lv 3/6 Passable

3ucalipto

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Re: GN Crew: Trick or Treat

In the beginning right after the moon there's a part where you need to jump from a block crossing a dot midair to get to a line of up arrows and a dot. When I jump and hold up trying to reach the arrows i get stuck right in the bottom of the up arrows with the smile slightly "shaking" without being affected correctly by the arrows. It looks a lot like a glitch. If i keep going right i reach the dot in the middle and the next up arrows work fine.

Weird.

MrScaniaV8Super

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Re: GN Crew: Trick or Treat

Nice minimap .. good luck with the contest

Last edited by mrscaniav8super (Oct 24 2011 12:38:41 pm)

Drew12345

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Re: GN Crew: Trick or Treat

thanks everyone especially wallacenew for the comments!

also no i am not done with the minis but i have goten farther
also im not done on the tree/moon and might change the house a bit

finally just as everyone pretty much said... the "box minis" i tried not to do that but the letters kinda formed it themselves... but its not like that afterwards glad to say!