Official Everybody Edits Forums

Muffin

Guest

Hallowinners.

This is my team's Halloween level. Please rate it and give feedback .

http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWqhvE6rr2a0I
http://beta.everybodyedits.com/games/PWqhvE6rr2a0I

Made by Muffin, Sythe5665, and Thwinkt.

Challenge: First to post the Charlie Brown reference gets a +rep.

Last edited by Muffin (Oct 23 2011 9:17:37 am)

Gaing

Guest

Re: Hallowinners.

Its cool. Good luck in the contest!

Master1

Member

From: Crait

Joined: 2015-02-15

Posts: 4,452

Re: Hallowinners.

Cool level, good luck

---

xXExpress0Xx

Guest

Re: Hallowinners.

Way too many arrows at the last mini

Muffin

Guest

Re: Hallowinners.

Final mini split into 2 minis and made slightly easier by 'popular' demand.

Ralaina

Guest

Re: Hallowinners.

First of all the ground needs more shading it's looking quite empty. And eeeh Im to tired to say anything serious. But it looks kindof plain right now. And in some minis there are many unneeded parts. Parts that you dont need to use in order to clear the mini.

Breadfinn

Member

Joined: 2015-02-15

Posts: 2,063

Re: Hallowinners.

Didn't BFS help too?

---

Muffin

Guest

Re: Hallowinners.

^He did once, He made the first tree, but I later changed it. He never came back, so I think I'm gonna kick him off the team.

Ralaina: Are you talking about the last mini game, or are you saying I should make all of the minigames harder? It's not supposed to be very hard in the beginning, and at the end I have no clue what Thwinkt was thinking. Could you please clairify this?

Ralaina

Guest

Re: Hallowinners.

No but there are alot of minis where there are arrows which you dont need to use to complete the minis. So lot of arrows that are of no use.

Muffin

Guest

Re: Hallowinners.

I changed the graveyard and final 2 minis, but how should I shade the ground? Whenever I do it with red brick it doesn't look very good >.>

Mylo

Master Developer

From: Drama

Joined: 2015-02-15

Posts: 829

Re: Hallowinners.

stucked on the first mhh thing and i havent the time to mhh give them my full exp.

---

https://m-k.io

Muffin

Guest

Re: Hallowinners.

^Dude, seriously. That's not meant to be the slightest bit hard. You jump from stem to stem.

Ralaina

Guest

Re: Hallowinners.

Then try something else than redbricks, I think maybe the wooden brick could fit in your level. Maybe even the greyish brick one.

DKZero

Guest

Re: Hallowinners.

I don't liked the minis. But good luck with the contest anyway!

Muffin

Guest

Re: Hallowinners.

^ugh. What don't you like about the minigames? Are there certain ones you'd like changed?

Cyral

Member

From: United States

Joined: 2015-02-15

Posts: 2,269

Re: Hallowinners.

I'm not gonna say anything on the minis, I suck at making minis and sometimes beating them, but about art

It needs to be shaded better, possibly smoother on the houses, use darker bricks to fade it into the background, the dirt could use work, it looks kinda plain, you could use tombstone decor do shade around the moon, as it looks a little squared off in some spots. The fog at the top could be blended better, maybe use tombstone and summer pack rock.

Well good luck to you in the competition!

---

Player Since 2011. I used to make bots and stuff.

Muffin

Guest

Re: Hallowinners.

Tombstones added to the fog, thanks. Looks much better now.

Not sure how to do the moon. I'll try and ask Thwinkt later.

Not sure what to do to the houses.

Dirt changed, looks kinda ugly for now though.

Cyral

Member

From: United States

Joined: 2015-02-15

Posts: 2,269

Re: Hallowinners.

^Looks much better

---

Player Since 2011. I used to make bots and stuff.

Muffin

Guest

Re: Hallowinners.

A few more things updated including the ground, and picture updated:

Koya

Fabulous Member

From: The island with those Brits

Joined: 2015-02-18

Posts: 6,310

Re: Hallowinners.

Muffin This Is Cool.
I'm Making A 3D World 400X200, Caves & Scary Stuff

---

Thank you eleizibeth ^

I stack my signatures rather than delete them so I don't lose them

Kirby

Member

Joined: 2015-04-04

Posts: 4,311

Re: Hallowinners.

i find it sad how halfway in the level there is a jump onto a house chimney that looks like this
     ???
     ???
     ???
     ???
?????

anyways, after you fixed it, i won

Muffin

Guest

Re: Hallowinners.

^ I had just added that and didn't notice it was impossible.

MrScaniaV8Super

Guest

Re: Hallowinners.

Cool level, good luck with the contest

bliske

Member

Joined: 2015-04-05

Posts: 411

Re: Hallowinners.

expected better
but nice

zizi17

Guest

Re: Hallowinners.

It's looks like my city made by me .:)