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kaylee123

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Halloween Dream

This is my Halloween level for the contest.
I want some feedback on the already made minis, and art.
Story:
"You wake up in the middle of the night and see a strange portal in your bedroom. You go though it and end up in a mysterious world! You try going back, but can't. Collect all the keys to unlock a door to the safe place, before it's too late!"
~Keys= Coins~

http://beta.everybodyedits.com/games/PWx4I7VXiQa0I
http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWx4I7VXiQa0I

NOTE: Minis are extremely easy, as most of the ee community can't handle harder minis.

Last edited by kaylee123 (Oct 27 2011 6:49:25 pm)

Shy Guy

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Re: Halloween Dream

The minis were great as well as the art. I hope you can achieve a place in the winner's circle.

:3

kaylee123

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Re: Halloween Dream

Aww, thanks Shy Guy

plat aka kingpooultra

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Joined: 2017-05-27

Posts: 3,873

Re: Halloween Dream

Nice job! I really like it.

Master1

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From: Crait

Joined: 2015-02-15

Posts: 4,452

Re: Halloween Dream

nice level kaylee did you do all this on your own?!?! it looks really cool!

I hope you place in the contest

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Gaing

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Re: Halloween Dream

Best wishes i hope you win a place in the halloween kaylee123. Just don't give up you can do it!

kaylee123

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Re: Halloween Dream

@Master1: Yes and thanks
@ Gaing and Kingpooultra: Thanks

theditor

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Joined: 2015-02-18

Posts: 1,320

Re: Halloween Dream

Firstly i looked to minimap.
First look was ok,but when i took a closer look....
Pressed space,secret blocks appeared.
Next thing i saw was lobby.

art 4/10
minis ???/???

EENinja

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Re: Halloween Dream

I didn't play it because I don't have time but Kaylee you have managed to do something no one else has, make an art map that works with minis

The art was awesome, I think this could make it into top 12 or atleast get a sepcial mention. Nice work Kaylee

kaylee123

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Re: Halloween Dream

Firstly i looked to minimap.
First look was ok,but when i took a closer look....
Pressed space,secret blocks appeared.
Next thing i saw was lobby.

art 4/10
minis ???/???

What's wrong with secret blocks?
and @ EENinja, thanks

fox_boy

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Re: Halloween Dream

Kaylee123 :DDDD cool level. hope you win something :DDD

Shift

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Re: Halloween Dream

Pretty nice; I could certainly see you guys placing.

However, I did notice some flaws in the minis. First, I don't appreciate it when I fall down the cliff side and need to do a whole bunch of minis over again. Second, the background hints lead me to believe some minis are exploitable. Third, why would I go back? I have all the coins and did all the challenges, so why should I make the long trek back just for the win box?

Art: 8/10
Minis: 7/10
Overall: 8/10
Expected Placement: 3rd

kaylee123

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Re: Halloween Dream

Pretty nice; I could certainly see you guys placing.

However, I did notice some flaws in the minis. First, I don't appreciate it when I fall down the cliff side and need to do a whole bunch of minis over again. Second, the background hints lead me to believe some minis are exploitable. Third, why would I go back? I have all the coins and did all the challenges, so why should I make the long trek back just for the win box?

Art: 8/10
Minis: 7/10
Overall: 8/10
Expected Placement: 3rd

Since the contest was extended, I changed a few things. I made it so if you fall down on the cliff you can go through a portal, back to where you fell, with a coin system. Also, I was rushed a bit so I am adding more minis and coins at the bottom right. Even more, I changed a bit of the art, and made the castle look better. Oh yeah, "see you guys", I'm solo on this map.