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xGBx-PwNzZ

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Out Of The Grave.

http://beta.everybodyedits.com/games/PW2wpFiiPra0I

http://everybodyedits.com/games/PW2wpFiiPra0I

This world is by me and Sleepy,

Hope you enjoy it, We have been told the art is Amazing   a Couple of times >_>

Anyway Enjoy.
Faq: How long did it take to make the world?= About a week and a half.

How many people made it?= Two= Me, Sleepy,

Why Did you think of that title name?= I dont know ask Sleepy.

Who done more?= We dont the same (Were not awnsering that)

What would you rate it as your world?= Eh a 9.

Feel free to ask questions.

Last edited by xGBx-PwNzZ (Oct 29 2011 3:07:28 am)

Deadlord

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Joined: 2015-04-06

Posts: 437

Re: Out Of The Grave.

I really like this map. Your art is quiet impressive. You just need to shade some things more,and it would be really epic.

But I am really disaponted about the minis. I saw some hooks,and some sticky jumps and arrow jumps that are quiet annoying aswell. You also used black box minis.

Rpgmaster2000 said: - Art and minigames should blend in seamlessly with each other. What this means is that we?d for example prefer not to see a bunch of completely black Minigame boxes surrounding a piece of beautiful art.

So it's a real problem for you . :\

Overall: 7/10
It would be a 9 if the minis woren't   so bad.

xGBx-PwNzZ

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Re: Out Of The Grave.

Ok Thanks for the comment, I will change the horrible hooks,

MRBOOGAWESOME

Guest

Re: Out Of The Grave.

What deadlord said. the art is really good, but the minis are bad. Box minis. Black box minis. Rpg said that he didnt want to see black box minis, he wanted the minis to blend in with the art.

ART: 8-9/10
MINIS: 2-3/10

Sorry :/

Last edited by MRBOOGAWESOME (Oct 29 2011 3:52:37 am)

ILoveBacon

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Re: Out Of The Grave.

9/10 for art. its my kind of art, but not perfect in some places. but the minis are another story, there not fun, not challenging and not original, but its good...

kaylee123

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Re: Out Of The Grave.

The art was really nice, but what everyone else is saying.. that theres black box minis, and plus they're not enjoyable(to me at least).

Shy Guy

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Re: Out Of The Grave.

I simply love the art style, but the minis ruin the whole level. Black box and they're unoriginal.
5/10

theditor

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Joined: 2015-02-18

Posts: 1,320

Re: Out Of The Grave.

first look to minimap was impressive,but as soon as i looked to minis,i was shocked.
I feel sorry for you,but yeah,the minis ruin it.

art 8/10
minis 1/10

-pedobeer

xGBx-PwNzZ

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Re: Out Of The Grave.

I totally agree about the minis,

MRBOOGAWESOME

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Re: Out Of The Grave.

I totally agree about the minis,

Then why did you make them?!

xGBx-PwNzZ

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Re: Out Of The Grave.

Mrboogawesome, I dont want you posting in my topic

Last edited by xGBx-PwNzZ (Oct 30 2011 3:52:27 am)

ThuggishPrune

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Re: Out Of The Grave.

Coolperson, Guess what. You can't make that rule. And he isn't breaking a rule

BTW Nice art.

MRBOOGAWESOME

Guest

Re: Out Of The Grave.

Then why did you let sleepy make them if you knew they werent 'up to standards'?

And by the way you cant report me and tell me i cant post in this topic when i am doing nothing wrong, and quite frankly am just asking a simple question.

supadorf24

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Joined: 2015-02-26

Posts: 2,675

Re: Out Of The Grave.

It's his thread; if he doesn't want you posting in it, be courteous and don't.

MRBOOGAWESOME

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Re: Out Of The Grave.

It's his thread; if he doesn't want you posting in it, be courteous and don't.

Sarcasm? Im aloud to post on the forum.

ThuggishPrune

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Re: Out Of The Grave.

*slowly back out of topic before flame war erupts*

just fix the minis

supadorf24

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Joined: 2015-02-26

Posts: 2,675

Re: Out Of The Grave.

It's his thread; if he doesn't want you posting in it, be courteous and don't.

Sarcasm? Im aloud to post on the forum.

Sure, you're allowed to, but if he doesn't want you to post in his thread, the polite thing to do would be to stop posting in his thread. If you feel you're justified in continuing to post against his will, then by all means go ahead.

theredtigers

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Re: Out Of The Grave.

wise words

Red

Guest

Re: Out Of The Grave.

It's not like you're not aloud to use black blocks for your minis, it was just a suggestion.
So yeah, it doesn't really matter that much.

As said, art is cool, but the minis are just.. meh.

Sleepy

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Re: Out Of The Grave.

I used the black blocks as something to hide the sky along the mini-games, also what I did try to do is to mix it up with the stars, that also counts as art, isn't it?
About the mini-games, I wasn't half way to finish the minis when I was working with Cool-person, he could of tell me that they're not good.
Well, I could of try making the minis more enjoyable/original , but how? Just saying they're not fun nor original doesn't really helps.

I also have a feeling that most of you here didn't even finish all of the minis, assuming that if the minis at the beginning are bad, the rest will be the same.

Last edited by Sleepy (Oct 29 2011 3:12:15 pm)

fox_boy

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Re: Out Of The Grave.

that is some freaking epic art!!! too bad it used boxed minis instead of blending in. love still love it tho.

EDIT: you guys are really good artist, but you could use a minigamer. Wanna get together and start a crew? Im a worthy minigamer, and you guys are almost ex crew material for art! PM and ill answer as soon as I can.

Last edited by fox_boy (Oct 29 2011 4:06:37 pm)

MaybeNot

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Re: Out Of The Grave.

Like everyone said, art is fantastic though minis are the ones bringing your level down. If you need to use black blocks, atleast don't make boxes surrounding them.

IMO, art doesn't feel halloween at all. I can see there's a 'zombie', but its so colourful it looks like a bunny. Thus, the level would be better in the Easter or New Years competitions as it's so colourful along with the bright stars in the sky.

Nickolai

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Joined: 2015-02-26

Posts: 368

Re: Out Of The Grave.

awesome art minis in the beginning are too annoying to complete not allowing most players to get to the end

EEguy

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Re: Out Of The Grave.

Pretty much what everyone said, tha art was fantastic and the art style was really awesome.
The minis though, were a major let down. I didn't play through all of them because I got bored on the 7th coin. They're black box minis and they're unoriginal. Overall, 7/10.

xGBx-PwNzZ

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Re: Out Of The Grave.

Mrboggawesome I told You i dont want you posting in this topic.

Last edited by xGBx-PwNzZ (Oct 30 2011 3:53:03 am)