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Kirby

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Rotat-Spin

Hello! Here is the new concept I have been working on
Please only constructive criticism. And yes, there are 1x1 hooks at the end as a "win mini."
The minimap looks like box minis, but trust me, there is more to it that that.
Please only constructive criticism. And yes, there are 1x1 hooks at the end as a "win mini."
Each mini can be done in 4 directions, and which direction you get depends on your luck
Please only constructive criticism. And yes, there are 1x1 hooks at the end as a "win mini."
I've made it so the spawn chooses randomly which mini you start out with and the portals choose randomly which direction you are going to do the next mini.
Please only constructive criticism. And yes, there are 1x1 hooks at the end as a "win mini."
The real game can be played here.
Please only constructive criticism. And yes, there are 1x1 hooks at the end as a "win mini."
Please only constructive criticism. And yes, there are 1x1 hooks at the end as a "win mini."
The level can be played either here (beta) or here (non-beta)
Please only constructive criticism. And yes, there are 1x1 hooks at the end as a "win mini."
Please only constructive criticism. And yes, there are 1x1 hooks at the end as a "win mini."

Please only constructive criticism. And yes, there are 1x1 hooks at the end as a "win mini."
In case you were wondering, this level took exactly 60 portals.
Please only constructive criticism. And yes, there are 1x1 hooks at the end as a "win mini."
I know that because the number of portals I have is 60, and I have used every single one in this level
Please only constructive criticism. And yes, there are 1x1 hooks at the end as a "win mini."
Good luck, and this is only the mini version, I will later be releasing the bigger version which takes up a whole massive world.
Please only constructive criticism. And yes, there are 1x1 hooks at the end as a "win mini."
If you like the concept, please reply
Please only constructive criticism. And yes, there are 1x1 hooks at the end as a "win mini."
If you dislike the concept, please reply
PLEASE ONLY constructive criticism. And yes, there are 1x1 hooks at the end as a "win mini."
If you like the level, please reply
Please only constructive criticism. And yes, there are 1x1 hooks at the end as a "win mini."
If you dislike the level, please reply
Please only constructive criticism. And yes, there are 1x1 hooks at the end as a "win mini."
Feedback wanted and needed!
Please only constructive criticism. And yes, there are 1x1 hooks at the end as a "win mini."
Please only constructive criticism. And yes, there are 1x1 hooks at the end as a "win mini."
P.S. the picture is clickable!

Last edited by kirby1394 (Nov 20 2011 10:37:15 am)

calculusguy

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Re: Rotat-Spin

Whats with all the black text spam?

Kirby

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Re: Rotat-Spin

how bout you dont highlight it and read the main post? and if you read what the text SAYS that would be nice

demango

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Re: Rotat-Spin

Don't be mean; calculusguy was right. Anyways, the level has a decent concept that is shown VERY badly. You can't even see the shapes rotating, and they only rotate once.

Kirby

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Re: Rotat-Spin

if you reload then it rotates differently. thanks for the positive comment demango :\

D-rock2308

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Re: Rotat-Spin

I really hate how you incorporate your wins with 1x1 hooks and boring minigames. Yay I win, now Im trapped....

Master1.0

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Re: Rotat-Spin

I know, the level doesn't look as nice as you think it would, but your dislikes are a tiny bit extreme.

Kirby

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Re: Rotat-Spin

since everyone hates my level, i have decided NOT to make the second version, which is a shame, because the minis were loads better

Koya

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Re: Rotat-Spin

I realy like it

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Kirby

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Re: Rotat-Spin

thanks squad ;D

Buzzerbee

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Re: Rotat-Spin

I like how you tried to use a new concept, but I don't think it quite worked for you.

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Spyro

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Re: Rotat-Spin

Ah banjo-kazzoie's Mad monster mansion

Kirby

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Re: Rotat-Spin

um, thats my sig. the real level in this topic is rotat spin...

Koya

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Re: Rotat-Spin

thanks squad ;D

I think it will work better in a bigger scale
and this has given me an idea, not a copy of this world.

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Xenonetix

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Re: Rotat-Spin

Why ruin a really good concept with 1x1 hooks? If you have enough portals, I would recommend at the end of each box teleing to a small separate area just to pick up a coin and then tele back to the next mini (randomly chosen from the 4 options). Some decent minis you have in there to although I think it would be better on a slightly larger scale.

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Valarik

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Re: Rotat-Spin

I liked it.

ugotpwned

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Re: Rotat-Spin

Concept is good, could use some work. I was impressed on the mini's and how small they were, but i think the concept could be better used for than just for box mini's. Maybe even art.

Last edited by UgotPwned (Nov 24 2011 12:37:27 pm)