Do you think I could just leave this part blank and it'd be okay? We're just going to replace the whole thing with a header image anyway, right?
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A boy trick and treating gets a surprise when monsters decide to visit on halloween night.
potted plant strikes again >.<
mods will get him soon
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Any opinions?
Yes.
Great world. One of the best I've seen so far
Minis were highly enjoyable. I really like them, didn't have time to finish them though so Im not sure what they were like later on.
The art was good. I didn't think there was anything tooo special about it, mabey thats just because the comp is filled with other great artist as well.
I'd give it a 7 mabey 8/10 and probly a second place. I thought the art was the only thing that could be improved. The tree and the pumpkin kid. Other than that there wasn't really much you could do to make it better though
Last edited by EENinja (Oct 26 2011 9:48:54 pm)
Is this for the comp world
Yes^
Also treejoe4 i love the description for the world really tells the people a lot about it
EDIT: thanks for the comments eeninja
Last edited by MRBOOGAWESOME (Oct 27 2011 5:41:16 am)
Yes.
Great world. One of the best I've seen so far
Minis were highly enjoyable. I really like them, didn't have time to finish them though so Im not sure what they were like later on.
The art was good. I didn't think there was anything tooo special about it, mabey thats just because the comp is filled with other great artist as well.
I'd give it a 7 mabey 8/10 and probly a second place. I thought the art was the only thing that could be improved. The tree and the pumpkin kid. Other than that there wasn't really much you could do to make it better though
Thanks EENinja, and liking the sig Booga
EENinja wrote:Yes.
Great world. One of the best I've seen so far
Minis were highly enjoyable. I really like them, didn't have time to finish them though so Im not sure what they were like later on.
The art was good. I didn't think there was anything tooo special about it, mabey thats just because the comp is filled with other great artist as well.
I'd give it a 7 mabey 8/10 and probly a second place. I thought the art was the only thing that could be improved. The tree and the pumpkin kid. Other than that there wasn't really much you could do to make it better though
Thanks EENinja, and liking the sig Booga
Haha lol thanks,
anymore comments?
dude you guys have just pwnd EE!
Lol thankyou.
Also does this:
Look familiar?
It changed so much
lol^
Hmmm I need a sig for our contest team... sense treejoe and mrboogasm have one...
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Choose out of either the animation or the one treejoe4 has got, since I made both.
We need more reviews plox...
Bump... we need some feedback guys
here is the minimap:
Last edited by NaztyRushz (Oct 29 2011 9:46:44 am)
Lol thankyou.
Also does this:
http://i.imgur.com/y1ZBV.png
Look familiar?
yup,it does.
Well,very beautyful map and it has extremely big change to come in first place.
Only thing i doesen't like,is the background ''portal''.
It has no bottom object (ground,hill,mountay,wall etc.) or something. Air portals?
The minis are bit too hard,but still ok
So,it's all perfect. Especally the sexy shading and very realistic grass.
Good luck!
art 10/10
minis 9,5/10 (changed from 8,5 to 9,5 because cold coffee(expresso) who.....ah nvm)
PS: the bones in that potplant or something are so small,but it self is so big.
-teddybear
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MRBOOGAWESOME wrote:Lol thankyou.
Also does this:
http://i.imgur.com/y1ZBV.png
Look familiar?yup,it does.
Well,very beautyful map and it has extremely big change to come in first place.
Only thing i doesen't like,is the background ''portal''.
It has no bottom object (ground,hill,mountay,wall etc.) or something. Air portals?
The minis are bit too hard,but still ok
So,it's all perfect. Especally the sexy shading and very realistic grass.
Good luck!art 10/10
minis 8,5/10PS: the bones in that potplant or something are so small,but it self is so big.
-teddybear
Thanks for your comment it is much appreciated.
yay finnaly somone who actually uses this to review the level
Thanks glad you liked it I really hope my team has a chance to pull ahead in this contest ^^
~keep reviewing guys we need more
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So far we have had 2 reviews and 1 world related comment, we need more reviews and suggestions for improvements, the competition entry deadline is approaching and we want to make the level the best it can be!
Suggestions are much appreciated
DESTroy it so my team can win plz? (its that good does not need to be better)
hell no why would we destroy a world that good lol I have yet to win a contest 1st, 2nd, or 3rd place.
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Hmm should we change the tongue sticking out of the monster mouth do to chris bad timing for adding background to show on the minimap.
Why? It makes it look cool
Yeah i think it looks ok.
Also i saw smilis in our worlds (the mega nooby world copier) :/ He was saying he was the only pro in the world. Just hope he dont copy.
Also treejoe4 i have an idea. Maybe add stars using backgrounds...?
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