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Calicara

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Core

Core

Non-Existent Non-beta

Welcome to the core, the center of life in itself. Feel free to look around, but remember that some doors are locked for a reason. What is that you wish to see the source of the power? Ha! You couldn't handle it! The sight of it will drive you mad!.... Determined aren't you? Well don't say I didn't warn you...

Last edited by Calicara (Dec 2 2011 4:00:49 pm)

Breadfinn

Member

Joined: 2015-02-15

Posts: 2,063

Re: Core

The Beta link is broken

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Baticon

Guest

Re: Core

Well,I liked it and enjoyed the minigames,what makes it special is the balance and harmony between the BG and FG blocks,I can tell you used it the right way.Even though the minis weren't unoriginal and boring,they were so easy.You can improve it by adding some illusions in it...
Good work,I'll give it a 7/10.

Calicara

Guest

Re: Core

Temporarily removed beta link, not in the mood to fix it.

@Baticon: Thanks. And Again I know about the minis. I've been trying to get Esox to help me, but he has been busy so I did them myself. Next level I promise to put effort into.

D-rock2308

Guest

Re: Core

It'd be cool if this had a life system and a portal back to the start. Somehow I finished with 6 coins too.

It was ok I guess, nothing special though.

Calicara

Guest

Re: Core

^^ I'll work on that. I generally don't want to make my levels overly difficult, as it is more appealing to newer players and that way people won't RQ every time they enter.

Again my main goal was just to make something with fancy background junk. Next time I'll base my art around the minis, and not the minis around the art.

xXExpress0Xx

Guest

Re: Core

Very nice level.

Hammy120

Guest

Re: Core

This is awesome.

calculusguy

Guest

Re: Core

Commenting...
Hookjump found>>-10 points
Most exit portals don't lead to themselfs>>-5 points
Forced repeat of a mini>>-3 points
Secret blocks used>>-5 points
^Secret blocks not easy to find, in other words, a secret block maze>>-4 points
^Secret blocks used multiple times>>-4 points
Noobyness higher than 30 (31)
Level playing terminated.
Rating: 0/30

plat aka kingpooultra

Member

Joined: 2017-05-27

Posts: 3,873

Re: Core

Nice level, I won and enjoyed it.

Muffin

Guest

Re: Core

Secret blocks used>>-5 points
^Secret blocks not easy to find, in other words, a secret block maze>>-4 points
^Secret blocks used multiple times>>-4 points

So you lose 13 points for using secret blocks in your level? The blocks were made for reasons. Also, where are your positive points?

I thought it was a nice level. I missed a coin somewhere though...

Calicara

Guest

Re: Core

Commenting...
Hookjump found>>-10 points
Most exit portals don't lead to themselfs>>-5 points
Forced repeat of a mini>>-3 points
Secret blocks used>>-5 points
^Secret blocks not easy to find, in other words, a secret block maze>>-4 points
^Secret blocks used multiple times>>-4 points
Noobyness higher than 30 (31)
Level playing terminated.
Rating: 0/30

All I will say to this is, if you don't like it don't play it.

If you want to live criticism, make it positive.

calculusguy

Guest

Re: Core

Then why do you always negatively critisize me?

D-rock2308

Guest

Re: Core

Then why do you always negatively critisize me?

Proof?

Calicara

Guest

Re: Core

Then why do you always negatively critisize me?

I don't.

And I ask that all further complaints please be PMed to me. This is a topic for my room, and I don't wish for it to be locked.

-Thank You

Cyral

Member

From: United States

Joined: 2015-02-15

Posts: 2,269

Re: Core

I like this level, The art could be improved upon, But thats not the main concept. Overall I loved it and enjoyed playing it! The end reminded me of MIHB's Level with all the confusing backgrounds and blocks, Great level.

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Player Since 2011. I used to make bots and stuff.

Calicara

Guest

Re: Core

Thanks EEbeast

I think I'm getting better at concepts with each level. I try to make due without text but it's hard sometimes. Next level will be a massive world

Yankeestar180

Guest

Re: Core

Good level, i liked the concept.
I ALWAYS love your stories for your levels.

Awesome job.

Calicara

Guest

Re: Core

Thanks Yankeestar

Koya

Fabulous Member

From: The island with those Brits

Joined: 2015-02-18

Posts: 6,310

Re: Core

[Thanks to the Player i.o. servers being updated I can't play one of your awesome worlds.]

Last edited by Metatron (Dec 4 2011 3:47:37 pm)

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Thank you eleizibeth ^

I stack my signatures rather than delete them so I don't lose them

Calicara

Guest

Re: Core

Lol, well I appreciate the effort

Maybe you can try it once the servers are running again.

Stupid

Guest

Re: Core

LOCKED FOR A REASON? pshaw! DOORS ARE MADE TO BE OPENED! BY LOCKING THEM, YOU ARE DENYING US THE SIMPLE RIGHTS SET OUT TO MAN BY THE WORLD AND THE CREATOR (if you believe that). BY LOCKING DOORS... RIGHTS ARE NO MORE.... THIS IS... THIS IS TYRANNY!!!!!!!!!!!!
Nice art

Master1

Member

From: Crait

Joined: 2015-02-15

Posts: 4,452

Re: Core

... the hell?

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Stupid

Guest

Re: Core

It is the truth I say.... The truth...and nothing more....as in the words of the great Poe!

Fdoou

Banned

Re: Core

Nice level. I love good art like this. The blue is great ^^