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Aedan

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Dorr Valley

When you where a child you lived in Dorr Valley until your parents where murdered, which put you in the orphanage. Any remains of the house is long gone now. Now you are old at the end of your life, but you want to travel from your house to Dorr Valley where you once lived. You are close to death when you finally manage to get there. You must get to certain points in the valley that you have always want to go to when you where a child. After that you will live out the last of your days watching over the valley enjoying all your childhood memories.
                                                                                                                             This is my first level.
                                                                                     Non-beta: http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWjUAvl63Qa0I
                                                                                     Beta: http://beta.everybodyedits.com/games/PWjUAvl63Qa0I

                                                                                     Sadly I can not post pictures for now so no picture is posted.
                                                                                   Any feedback on the minis, story line, or art would be welcome.
                                                           Thanks to anyone who helped me with shading or testing while I made this world.

Last edited by Aedan (Nov 23 2011 3:10:27 pm)

lickagoat

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Re: Dorr Valley

yeah i won... take that person who killed my parents. now i can rest in peace.

Valarik

Guest

Re: Dorr Valley

That was tough, but I had fun figuring it out.  

Aedan

Guest

Re: Dorr Valley

Any feed back on it? Particularly about the mini games.