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GKAbyss

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Earth 12 22 12

http://beta.everybodyedits.com/games/PWHWG1vqssbEI
http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWHWG1vqssbEI

Max told me to post: That I did the majority of the art, he did the text, and we had help from
cjdc
diek
detonater
dualampa
visje
boh,
and I think a few others.

Haze123

Member

Joined: 2015-03-09

Posts: 1,691

Re: Earth 12 22 12

wow is that true? also nice level

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I are back.

Ignia

Guest

Re: Earth 12 22 12

Reminds me bit of Dazz's level

This as far as I got, too many fallbacks. I didn't like that.
The earth itself looks quite well done (if it's not animated), but could be more neat, the gameplay in the earth was neither neat, as I said, too many fallbacks.
Nice level anyway.

Master1

Member

From: Crait

Joined: 2015-02-15

Posts: 4,452

Re: Earth 12 22 12

Here's my ratings:

Art: 2/3 (nice but could be better)
Minis: 1/4 (explanation at the bottom)
General Effect: 1/3 (needs work)
Total: 4/10

Minis: most of the minis inside the earth were boring minis. The multiple paths to coins and having to get all of them was rather annoying. After getting about half of them I fell out of the earth, and from there you can't even go back in to get the rest. Although the minis outside the earth were good, there were too many black blocks, and after you did those minis I noticed you had to beat them all 3 times which is crap. Serious improvements needed.

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MrScaniaV8Super

Guest

Re: Earth 12 22 12

Nice level Gka! +rep

Last edited by MrScaniaV8Super (Jan 15 2012 2:58:19 pm)

GKAbyss

Guest

Re: Earth 12 22 12

The minis in the earth were made in a hurry, and the exploration part was intended, though it wasn't that good. The hole in the side of the earth wasn't intended, someone kept making it, and it got saved that way :/ The black box minis were just extras, so that there would be something to do after winning, w/o them messing up the levels art, but someone made it so you had to play them 3 times, and someone drew some backgrounds, and a line showing how to do a mini got saved too.
Anyway thanks for feedback@everyone, I'll try to fix/improve everything when Max opens the level again.

MaxDG/MXIII

Guest

Re: Earth 12 22 12

Here's my ratings:

Art: 2/3 (nice but could be better)
Minis: 1/4 (explanation at the bottom)
General Effect: 1/3 (needs work)
Total: 4/10

Minis: most of the minis inside the earth were boring minis. The multiple paths to coins and having to get all of them was rather annoying. After getting about half of them I fell out of the earth, and from there you can't even go back in to get the rest. Although the minis outside the earth were good, there were too many black blocks, and after you did those minis I noticed you had to beat them all 3 times which is crap. Serious improvements needed.

Rate it on the idea too; did it have a good concept?
And out of three is not an efficient way to rate the artistic or creativity of it, out of five would be better, in my opninion.