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Anch

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WIP Ruins

Hey guys! Remember me? I AM BACKKKK. I'm working on a new world! Check it out. How do you think it is???
http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWZxKBBtgkbkI

Noctis

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Re: WIP Ruins

Get an image of your current progress

Nice map so far btw

Last edited by Noctis (Jan 19 2014 2:29:14 pm)

Creature

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Re: WIP Ruins

Win,i dont know if its done, but you shared,so,it might have to be completed.

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Anch

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Re: WIP Ruins

I said it wasn't done, and it says WIP in it. WIP stands for:
Work
In
Progress

iPwner

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Re: WIP Ruins

Sorry, but this levels minis don't require platforming, and just gravitational pull confusion. The art doesn't make sense. Why are there cannons in the background and treasure-chests stacked on top of eachother? I thought these were ruins, not an active pirate ship.

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Anch

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Re: WIP Ruins

Sorry, but this levels minis don't require platforming, and just gravitational pull confusion. The art doesn't make sense. Why are there cannons in the background and treasure-chests stacked on top of eachother? I thought these were ruins, not an active pirate ship.

Oh yeah, ummm those blocks, they are for minimap art. Wait... NO They are a flying pirate ship that doesn't make sense!

Creature

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Re: WIP Ruins

I said it wasn't done, and it says WIP in it. WIP stands for:
Work
In
Progress

Did you saw the description of rooms? Completed worlds

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Anch

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Re: WIP Ruins

I said it wasn't done, and it says WIP in it. WIP stands for:
Work
In
Progress

Did you saw the description of rooms? Completed worlds

Description: Share your rooms here! Tell us why we should try out your level!

Creature

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Re: WIP Ruins

I said it wasn't done, and it says WIP in it. WIP stands for:
Work
In
Progress

Did you saw the description of rooms? Completed worlds

Description: Share your rooms here! Tell us why we should try out your level!

But if you want post a incomplete level,you should post it in level creation.

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Anch

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Re: WIP Ruins

Did you saw the description of rooms? Completed worlds

Description: Share your rooms here! Tell us why we should try out your level!

But if you want post a incomplete level,you should post it in level creation.

Hey, I was just going to ask the mods to move it to there...
Mods: Can you move this to level creation for me? Thanks

Pingohits

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Re: WIP Ruins

nice i went there once when you were afk for 3 HOURS.

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Anch

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Re: WIP Ruins

I added more to the world. I also got help and made more minis! Try the world again. Ping, people like you misuse the work AFK
Away
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Keyboard
Your more away from the keyboard than I am C:

Creature

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Re: WIP Ruins

I added more to the world. I also got help and made more minis! Try the world again. Ping, people like you misuse the work AFK
Away
From
Keyboard
Your more away from the keyboard than I am C:

You have to saw how my afk be too long. Lets get back on-topic, tell me when your world is done.

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Echo!

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Re: WIP Ruins

That steeple on the far left is is cute as hell

Anch

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Re: WIP Ruins

Can someone move this to level creation? Also, I need some more ideas on what to build underneath the building. I was thinking of like putting it on a ledge on a mountain. But it might not be a very good idea.

Creature

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Re: WIP Ruins

Can someone move this to level creation? Also, I need some more ideas on what to build underneath the building. I was thinking of like putting it on a ledge on a mountain. But it might not be a very good idea.

You can report your post clicking in report in bottom right and put reason: Move: Level Creation

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Anch

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Re: WIP Ruins

Oh, thanks.

Fdoou

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Re: WIP Ruins

Honestly, it's pretty meh. It goes under the general category "things that people think are good but are not always good", which includes attempts at realistic art as opposed to a unique style, and goes for difficult minigames.
I'm not saying it can't be done right, it's just damn hard to do it right, and I don't think this level has got what is takes.

Being more specific to the level, no minigame particularly stands out, but some stand out as annoying and no fun. (think the luck based boost minigame, second part of of the second minigame, red minigame, third part of second minigame, second coin's minigame feels forced, etc.). This appears to be a case of letting the art control the minigames rather then building art around gameplay. I would redo this level entirely.

Last edited by Fdoou (Feb 3 2014 3:19:21 pm)

Anch

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Re: WIP Ruins

Honestly, it's pretty meh. It goes under the general category "things that people think are good but are not always good", which includes attempts at realistic art as opposed to a unique style, and goes for difficult minigames.
I'm not saying it can't be done right, it's just damn hard to do it right, and I don't think this level has got what is takes.

Being more specific to the level, no minigame particularly stands out, but some stand out as annoying and no fun. (think the luck based boost minigame, second part of of the second minigame, red minigame, third part of second minigame, second coin's minigame feels forced, etc.). This appears to be a case of letting the art control the minigames rather then building art around gameplay. I would redo this level entirely.

Mhh... I didn't even make many of the minis here. I'm probably going to change them anyway and make the art better. But thanks for the advice.

mrjawapa

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Re: WIP Ruins

Why is everyone hatin' on his level... i give to a good 7/10...

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Creature

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Re: WIP Ruins

Why is everyone hatin' on his level... i give to a good 7/10...

Im not hating,its the fdoou, hates everyone.

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Anch

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Re: WIP Ruins

Thanks guys, I might be working on a new world, so I will post it up soon.