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Noctis

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The Void

Itsmeandersonlol here, with a NEW level!

Introducing The Void.

You wake up in a strange dream. You wake up in a dark room. You see some stairs on either sides of you. You hear the humming of a portal. Should I enter?

If you find the blue coin, you get a +1 rep.

To play, click on the image.

Easy little minis to play when you got nothing to do.
Art and minis: By me

Last edited by Noctis (Feb 17 2014 2:13:13 pm)

Brushfire

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Re: The Void

Very fun.

Edit: found blue coin

▼Spoiler!

http://i.imgur.com/HXS63Nx.png

Last edited by Brushfire (Feb 1 2014 3:52:53 pm)

Creature

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Re: The Void

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dragonranger

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Re: The Void

I accidentally restarted while searching for the blue coin...
Fix that...
And fix those key minis, so cheap when someone steals your "key hit". Maybe 1 at a time?

Anyway, decent enough world...

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iPwner

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Re: The Void

Oh, but also, this is a "laminated level"... Basically, this means that there is minimap "art" (in this case, a color palette that keeps getting HOT,HOT,HOT, until a blazing flame of regret!) that surrounds a bunch of noob minis that are mascaraded with arrows to make them seem "superior" to normal noob minis, but are in truth the same dame thing! ;S   Sorry, the truth burns like a HOT,HOT mum on a morning run.  

Next time, make a platforming level in an open space that is interconnected and if you even want to strive for minimap art (which I wouldn't, bcuze this usually makes it look really cluttered/fugly in game -.-) make sure the gameplay experience is KEY! That's too, too bad, and makes me SAD, SAD, SAD! Your previous venture was just fancy stairs with bacon slapped in. ;|  

Oh well, good luck with your next level, and I hope you take my advizories into your acc! ^_^

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Falk

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Re: The Void

             
It is hard to find such worlds nowadays...
However this world gets 9/10 from me. (Also a woot.)
       
The art is very nice, the idea is original and the hidden secret makes
the game more interesting. (I found it.)
Minigames are also nice but a little bit too easy and too few. You created 20 but you have space for more then 100. (107 to be accurate.) 100 are not necessarily, but at least 40 would have been nice.
And maybe the difficulty increasing as you go further.
             
In general it's a very nice world. Congratulations!
Keep your good work up.

Last edited by Falk (Feb 2 2014 6:32:51 am)

mrjawapa

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Re: The Void

Nice world... im starting to see more interesting and fun worlds.... i like it

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iPwner

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Re: The Void

@ItsMeAndersonLol KK! ~

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Echo!

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Re: The Void

This was pretty fun to play, looks nice, and wasn't too hard for a noob like me

Pyromaniac

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Re: The Void

First of all, can we all collectively ask ourselves wtf ipwner, wtf.

Anyway, I really liked the art, as ipwner said, it kept getting HOT,HOT,HOT, until a blazing flame of regret! (wtf wtf wtf)

But seriously, it was nice. I dont think it "mascaraded around noob minis." The minis were fine, I would suggest trying to get away from box minis, however. These kind of looked like my minis, just like a lot of arrows.

Anyway, overall, i'd say goodjob! Keep making levels!

lucasmaster2000

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Noctis

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Re: The Void

BUMP

theditor

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Re: The Void

Had fun drawing the circles?
Unusual and cool art btw perhaps smoother color changes? so it's harder to see where exactly the color changes?

Last edited by theditor (Feb 11 2014 12:43:33 pm)

Noctis

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Re: The Void

Had fun drawing the circles?
Unusual and cool art btw perhaps smoother color changes? so it's harder to see where exactly the color changes?

GGGAAAHH

I would have lol but I already submitted it. That would be a pretty huge change. Should've told me earlier ;p

Noctis

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Re: The Void

Had fun drawing the circles?
Unusual and cool art btw perhaps smoother color changes? so it's harder to see where exactly the color changes?

Alright. Colors should appear to blend in more

iPwner

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Re: The Void

I dont think it "mascaraded around noob minis." The minis were fine, I would suggest trying to get away from box minis, however. These kind of looked like my minis, just like a lot of arrows.

Anyway, overall, i'd say goodjob! Keep making levels!

Yeh, but no offense, but your minis are not that fun either. A lot of arrows isn't how minis are supposed to be. I thought you were more ARTZY FARTZY?

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EPIOOOOOUUUUUUuuuuuu   IUO0O0oooooooooooppi

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Koto

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Re: The Void

You can't define a good mini.

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Noctis

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Re: The Void

Bump +1 mario coin