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Stagecrew

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Joined: 2015-02-15

Posts: 289

Twin Moons

Just my world for the contest, I was hoping I could get some feedback and suggestions here.

Link: Twin Moons

Enjoy!

Pyromaniac

Official Caroler

Joined: 2015-02-15

Posts: 4,868

Re: Twin Moons

This is literally the worst level ever. I am criticizing you. Have my criticism. Feel it as it washes over you. COnsider yourself duly criticized.
But actually it looks great. Im really diggin' the moons.

nlmdejonge

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Joined: 2015-02-15

Posts: 1,264

Re: Twin Moons

(mirror)

Minimap art reminds me of Fez.
Not sure what it has to do with sci-fi though, nor do I see two moons; maybe I need glasses though.
Some of the minis are a tad annoying.
Maybe add this arrow, which should make that section less annoying:

(mirror)

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I have permanently left the game and forum.
EE is an entertaining game and I enjoyed playing it...
...but it's time for me to move on.

Shadow

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From: idk

Joined: 2015-02-16

Posts: 729

Re: Twin Moons

Twin moons?
Ahh.. i m making two moons in my level too :rolleyes:

But the level is really good .The art is pretty good .

Stagecrew

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Joined: 2015-02-15

Posts: 289

Re: Twin Moons

Maybe add this arrow, which should make that section less annoying:

http://i.imgur.com/8VY4T1J.png

I liked this suggestion but when I tried adding it, I discovered that it created an easy exploit. (stop, jump while holding up on the arrow, and move right) It's possible I could make this less annoying by giving the player more speed on the platform.
EDIT: Implemented second idea, seems less annoying now.

You mentioned that there were multiple spots, could you point out some others?

Last edited by Stagecrew (Nov 18 2014 5:35:02 pm)

Mr. Force

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Re: Twin Moons

I BEAT DA LEVUL
Was cool but the last mini with keys was a bit meh
I haz no screenshut so u gotza beliv mi
Thank u