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REDL3EAST

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Farm Invasion

This is one of my levels I have created called "FARM INVASION!"
Check it out and reply with feedback. Tell me if you loved it or you hated it. IF it is hate make sure you tell me why so I know what to change in my future maps.
LEVEL LINK: http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWr5WYZ53TbEI

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Fdoou

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Re: Farm Invasion

how did you take that screenshot

REDL3EAST

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Re: Farm Invasion

how did you take that screenshot

http://titanshell.com/~lrussell/ee_tool … &mode=full

tak4n

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Joined: 2015-02-17

Posts: 1,883

Re: Farm Invasion

Art 4/10
Concept 1/10
Integration 3/10
Overall: 2.7/10
Ok let me begin by saying your minimap art is alright, and your ingame art is also bearable. What I did not like about your art is your usage of backgrounds. Your backgrounds made some places very difficult to see and therefore decreased the overall enjoyment due to the eye r**e.
Your challenges received the lowest grade because of the 2010 style unoriginal challenges used under the ground of your farm level. There was no difficulty involved while playing your level and it was a bit annoying trying to find where you had to go next once you got a certain amount of coins. Let me just say I did not really enjoy playing through your level.
I see a lot of problems with how you integrated your art with your challenges. There are a lot of eye sores such as boosts sticking out of the clouds and the arrow made out of shield decoration pointing downwards, you should try and avoid doing such things and make it clear where you have to go through a better method that does not hurt the score. Linear Branching is a great method to do so, open worlds can be confusing a lot of the time and should be avoided unless you know how to make it work.
The strong criticism I gave is somewhat harsh but will help you get started to make better levels
You should play through some of these levels: http://eeforumify.com/viewtopic.php?id=30496 to get a better idea of what the community likes to play through. However, in no way does that mean that you should copy anything from those levels. Copying art or challenges is strongly despised by the community and may follow with many consequences. I wish you luck at getting better in level building

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skullz17

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Joined: 2015-02-15

Posts: 6,699

Re: Farm Invasion

I don't have a problem with the bg but I think finding where you have to go is a problem. For example, this took me a very long time to find:

Other than that, art is nothing special and the challenges are a bit boring.

EDIT: What are those statue things with blue and red flags doing in the win box?

Last edited by skullz16 (Jul 18 2014 11:18:33 am)

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thx for sig bobithan

REDL3EAST

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Re: Farm Invasion

I don't have a problem with the bg but I think finding where you have to go is a problem. For example, this took me a very long time to find:

http://i.imgur.com/e10lEQJ.png

Other than that, art is nothing special and the challenges are a bit boring.

EDIT: What are those statue things with blue and red flags doing in the win box?

Thanks for the feedback The statue thing are supposed to be aliens in jail

REDL3EAST

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Re: Farm Invasion

Art 4/10
Concept 1/10
Integration 3/10
Overall: 2.7/10
Ok let me begin by saying your minimap art is alright, and your ingame art is also bearable. What I did not like about your art is your usage of backgrounds. Your backgrounds made some places very difficult to see and therefore decreased the overall enjoyment due to the eye r**e.
Your challenges received the lowest grade because of the 2010 style unoriginal challenges used under the ground of your farm level. There was no difficulty involved while playing your level and it was a bit annoying trying to find where you had to go next once you got a certain amount of coins. Let me just say I did not really enjoy playing through your level.
I see a lot of problems with how you integrated your art with your challenges. There are a lot of eye sores such as boosts sticking out of the clouds and the arrow made out of shield decoration pointing downwards, you should try and avoid doing such things and make it clear where you have to go through a better method that does not hurt the score. Linear Branching is a great method to do so, open worlds can be confusing a lot of the time and should be avoided unless you know how to make it work.
The strong criticism I gave is somewhat harsh but will help you get started to make better levels
You should play through some of these levels: http://eeforumify.com/viewtopic.php?id=30496 to get a better idea of what the community likes to play through. However, in no way does that mean that you should copy anything from those levels. Copying art or challenges is strongly despised by the community and may follow with many consequences. I wish you luck at getting better in level building

I really appreciate the in dept feedback you gave me. Thanks, you have no idea how much this will help me.

lrussell

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From: Saturn's Titan

Joined: 2015-02-15

Posts: 843

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Re: Farm Invasion

Nice level.
Also, you don't need to take a screenshot of the picture. It's already a picture on it's own, in fact you could just embed it right on the forum without uploading it to Postimg.

Anch

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Joined: 2015-02-16

Posts: 5,447

Re: Farm Invasion

The art was OK and finding the coins was tedious. Also there were lots of decorations and backgrounds and blocks which confused me (a little).