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simpleguest

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nature minus

I finnaly commpleted 80% of my freind's and my nature minus.
http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWQIXZZC3Ba0I
Contructive and destrutive critics are welcome.

Side note: art for the stary sky is not do yet.

nlmdejonge

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Joined: 2015-02-15

Posts: 1,264

Re: nature minus

I finnaly commpleted 80% of my freind's and my nature minus.
http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWQIXZZC3Ba0I
Contructive and destrutive critics are welcome.

Side note: art for the stary sky is not do yet.

Too many hook jumps. In the sky, the player gets a coin each time (s)he finishes the same track, and 6 coins are required for a coin door. It's not fun/interesting/challenging for players to replay the same thing over and over. All in all, the room give me the feeling that you probably should've worked on a smaller world.

[Edit: By the way, in your other room, most players won't be able to make this jump: http://i.imgur.com/BcXhS.png (mirror) Oh, even if it succeeds it's not possible to grab the coins.]

Last edited by nlmdejonge (Jun 14 2011 12:09:15 pm)

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I have permanently left the game and forum.
EE is an entertaining game and I enjoyed playing it...
...but it's time for me to move on.

simpleguest

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Re: nature minus

I'll change the other one. The coins were a joke anyway. But on this one there will be no hook jumps.